Looking For Alaska
By: Kismat The major problem that Pudge had to deal with in the story was Alaska's death. I think you responded to the conflicts in the story smartly and strongly.You investigated Alaska's death by investigating the scene of the crime and finding clues that would lead to the truth of her death.
I would've done some things differently if I was you. I would've not let Alaska go in such a bad state in the first place and I would've investigated the scene of the crash the first time I was there. Also if you would've admitted your love to Alaska she would've admitted it as well. If you would've done these things you wouldn't have had to struggle.
But overall I think you did a good job of responding
to the problems well considering the situation and time. It's hard to think when you have lost someone special. I think that you handled it well.