International Adoption Should Be Banned Essay
International Adoption
Attention grabber:
Children in foreign countries are left to live unhappily in harmful and dangerous environments. By banning international adoption we are risking these children’s lives.
Good morning/afternoon classmates and Mrs Roche I am here today to convince you that international adoption should not be banned.
Thesis:
International adoption should be permitted in countries such as Australia, which is filled with families couples that have been through all of the appropriate background checks, and still they wait to get the adoptive child.
Background/rationale:
This issue is very important because these adoptive couples are either willing to bring a new child into there family or are unable to conceive …show more content…
The prices these people pay is outrageous. The government keeps saying we are doing everything we can to get these children adopted but how can they when they set the price of adoption to $10,000 up to a massive $35,000+. In china, which is the most overpopulated country in the world the price range for adoption, is 20 to 30 thousand dollars. I believe if we lower the price to internationally adopt more children will be adopted and the rate of orphans would drop drastically.
Adoption companies might just be trying to assure the safety of these kids but with all the contracts and legal documents don’t you think it’s just a little overboard? These contracts and background checks take the risk of scaring these couples away, which in the end does not benefit the children at all. Although the safety of the child is essential it is important to make these contracts simply and easy to read to make sure that the adoptive couples realizes the responsibilities they would be taking on and also understand what they must do to care and provide for the child. Effectively we a giving the parent or parents a licence to raise a child. This task does not need to be
Attention grabber:
Children in foreign countries are left to live unhappily in harmful and dangerous environments. By banning international adoption we are risking these children’s lives.
Good morning/afternoon classmates and Mrs Roche I am here today to convince you that international adoption should not be banned.
Thesis:
International adoption should be permitted in countries such as Australia, which is filled with families couples that have been through all of the appropriate background checks, and still they wait to get the adoptive child.
Background/rationale:
This issue is very important because these adoptive couples are either willing to bring a new child into there family or are unable to conceive …show more content…
The prices these people pay is outrageous. The government keeps saying we are doing everything we can to get these children adopted but how can they when they set the price of adoption to $10,000 up to a massive $35,000+. In china, which is the most overpopulated country in the world the price range for adoption, is 20 to 30 thousand dollars. I believe if we lower the price to internationally adopt more children will be adopted and the rate of orphans would drop drastically.
Adoption companies might just be trying to assure the safety of these kids but with all the contracts and legal documents don’t you think it’s just a little overboard? These contracts and background checks take the risk of scaring these couples away, which in the end does not benefit the children at all. Although the safety of the child is essential it is important to make these contracts simply and easy to read to make sure that the adoptive couples realizes the responsibilities they would be taking on and also understand what they must do to care and provide for the child. Effectively we a giving the parent or parents a licence to raise a child. This task does not need to be