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Margot Alternate Ending
Samia Jannatul
2.9.16

Goodbye The children lined up with regretful, and ashamed faces.The setting was so melancholy no one uttered a sound. The clouds opened and shed a thousand tears. The teacher’s heels stomping on the ground were the only noise they heard, and it was growing louder. The door opened and the teacher was in complete shock to see Margot; she tried to grasp the idea that Margot had missed her only chance to see the copper glow that skimmed the horizon. Immediately the teacher pulled aside Margot from the class. As the teacher began to rumble on about the incident; Margot was generating a waterfall. “What do you think the teacher is telling Margot?” a girl asked. “More like what do you think that Margot is telling the teacher?” a boy questioned nervously while biting his nails.
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Every kid in the room had this gut feeling of bullying Margot, teasing her poems, and locking her up in the closet. *** Days had gone by and Margot hadn't shown up to school. Each day she stared at the window bawling her eyes out just like the rain. In the midst of her sobbing Margot’s mom walked in. “What's wrong, honey?” Margot’s mom “Can we go back to Earth? Please mom,” “Why do you ask that?” “Because I don't like Venus!” shouted Margot. “Margot please don't shout, that is very disrespectful.” Margot’s mom left the room very confused. Margot followed her mom after she left. “Did you see the sun last week?” Margot questioned. “Oh yes dear, wasn't it just splendid!” “No it wasn't because my classmates locked me in a closet while it came out,” “What!?” That afternoon, Margot explained the story to her mom, and they decided to pack for their return to planet

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