My Opinion Essay: My Vision For America

My vision for America is that I could see peace for this wonderful country, and great minds, and the future for mankind. If mankind keeps going it’s course like war or any other conflicts that is still going on to this. Day we would fall and loose everything that we hold so dear. We would lose our families and misunderstand how this path we still take will affect us. So basically what I am trying to say is that mankind needs to change its path and make a new one. We need to start over again so we can stop this childish conflict and get along with each other. We need to forgive not forget the ones we miss or look over.
The reason why we need to change our path or ways, is so we can forget the things we start. And what I mean that we need to
start over is that I mean we need to stop this nonsense. Why is violence a thing, in our schools and neighborhoods a kid or student gets hurt for gang related stuff and acting or thinking they can control the world and nobody questions it. But of course people keep their mouth shut about so they won’t get hurt. Yes it’s bad to tell on someone but it’s a good thing cause it keeps the person in line and teaches them a lesson. What I mean them I am talking about the people who act this way. Well anyway, my vision for America is there might be a bright future, a future where could there be peace and no violence. What I think if we changed our ways we might have a peaceful future depending on what would we do to change it.
For example if we was to change how our problems can could get in the way. Like our enemies, and taxes. After all we make and create our future, it just depends how the world [meaning America] acts or if America changes its ways and understanding the world and how it works. People don’t realize how important the stuff we do affects the future.
And again, my vision for America is how I see this country or how others see this country. If we continue our action or the choices we make then this country will fall apart. Everything will fall, the people, the government, and the company’s. But if we do change our ways then America will have a beautiful future. So if we do change our ways we could do anything, we could help the poor, we could change our government system, we could do anything.
My vision for America is the same vision that everyone has. But my vision is that we need to change our ways. Change the system or change the way we see things. But if we don’t change our ways then America will fall. If we still haven’t changed our ways then America will have a bad future. Again if we change our ways then we will have a beautiful
future.