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Personal Narrative: My Changes In My Writing
When it comes to writing, I become seriously stressed. I will put off all writing as long as I can. I can become physically sick from the amount of destress that essays, journals, and letters cause me. Since I put these assignments off for so long, they usually end up sloppy and not proofread. Taking this class was in hopes of remedying that as well as helping me to become a better writer. While I have learned a few things about writing from this class, like narrative line and that commas need to go before connector words in order to connect independent clauses, I do not feel any better about writing. As I put these words into my word processor, I feel sick and have put this off for too long. My writing process has not become any less stressful.
I have, however, modified how I go about writing. The biggest changes to my writing have been the mad man and revision process. Since I am your stereotypical procrastinator, I usually do not have time to do either of these. I have been attempting to follow the steps that were taught in class, but when I mad man write, my ideas do not culminate into a thesis or anything that is helpful. This usually causes me to stress out even more about the writing. The revision process, however, has been much more fruitful. On the papers within, I have gone back and revisited. I found grammatical
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The informal writing is from our Photographic Auto-Biography free-write; “The Daughter of a Teen Mom” examines how I see my younger self and looks at the wonder of being the child of a teenager. It is in some ways an introduction to “The Apple Doesn’t Fall Far,” my revised personal writing. This piece tells about becoming one’s parents and how that might change as one leaves the nest. The final piece is about one of my favorite people to be around. It is a small introduction to my best friend, and how he encounters the world and carries

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