Preview

Personal Narrative Of Clayton's Survival

Powerful Essays
Open Document
Open Document
1585 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
Personal Narrative Of Clayton's Survival
Clayton's survival
I woke up hazed with blurred vision. The right side of my face was dried and burned. The left side of my face was soaked in salt water and blood. I was freaked out and picked up my head and blinked rapidly. I saw nothing but blue for miles and miles, the sky and the water. When I looked down I saw nothing but a small black and orange rubber dingy. I tried to think about what had happened. It was then when I realized I couldn't even remember my own name. Then panic just settled in for some reason I jumped in the water freaking out. I came to my senses and quickly started using all my strength to hurdle myself in the dingy.

I knew I needed to figure out what happened and do it fast. I quickly felt my pockets to find my wallet barely intact held by a thread. Salt water felt into my eyes and I went to wipe it away only to see it was blood from a three inch gash on my eyebrow. I looked under a tarp in the dingy and found a wooden box with orange floats attached to it. The latch was corroded from the sea water but it opened up. In the box there were 3 small plastic waterproof containers. On the
…show more content…
The plane was getting closer by the second. I went to pull the trigger then heard a click. That was probably the worst thing that could happen in that scenario so I went to pop out the flare and put it back it. But as I opened it the flare was ejected out into the water. I dove in after it and grabbed it with a death grip. Jumping back in the dingy I put the flare back in and pulled back the hammer and fires that flare straight at the plane. The shot was so great that it almost hit the plane. The plane circled around and started to get lower the side read U.S. Coast Guard. 30 minutes later a helicopter came and hovered above me. The side of the helicopter shot open with a man in a bright orange water suit jumped out. He swam to me and said “Hi i'm peter we are here to help. what is your name?” I told him

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    Fish on! Fish on! We were fishing on Eagle Lake Canada and we were headed to our lucky spot by Bird Turd island it is out in the BIG lake. We are fishing on a windy day, we hit a huge 4 foot wave head on and our Crestliner boat capsized. I quickly grabbed my backpack, in my backpack I had a marine radio, a survival kit, sunscreen, and some extra food. We swam to closest island call Bird Turd island. I looked back, all of my belonging were sinking to the bottom of the lake. We were shipwrecked! I was screaming and screaming and screaming for help but no one could hear me. I heard a boat so I screamed so more and no one was there. I was hoping someone was coming. I stayed there for what felt like hours, so I decided to walk around and look at the island. I came across and tiny little shed.…

    • 943 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Matt Eversmann Quotes

    • 904 Words
    • 4 Pages

    We make it to the location and we are just hovering above it, and there is sand everywhere I can’t see anything. There are bullets flying everywhere and the pilot moves the plane a little too far and we are couple blocks away from our location, and I don’t know what to say when the pilot asks me what to do. I make a decision that I am not so sure of, and I say to just drop us off here, everyone starts to get off, and I am the last one to exit the plane. When I am going down I see a body and my heart sinks, I am thinking did someone die already? When i get on the ground I see it's the kid Blackburn…

    • 904 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    “All ahead emergency!” was shouted out by Commander O’Kane. Apparently our last torpedo ended up circling around and hit the USS Tang. The floor shook beneath of us. Water started flowing in slowly but we didn’t have much time before we ended up hitting the bottom of the ocean. Looks were exchanged and we all stood there breathless. I ran to the door and pushed. I pushed again. As hard as I could, I pushed on the door for the third time. It wouldn’t open.…

    • 560 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    I found a firecracker on the ground. I put 2 and 2 together and thought why not light it, it won't kill anybody, and i'm killing 2 birds with one stone because i’m using up my punk and not wasting it and getting rid of a firecracker. I picked it up and as soon as I touched my punk to the wick it lit and burned as quick as a cheetah and EXPLOdED right in my face. I fell back and my ears were ringing I couldn't hear anything. I was partially blinded by the explosion. As I open my eye I am laying in the dirt so I quickly stood up and looked up to see if anyone saw, luckily no one saw so I ran quickly…

    • 786 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    The last of the ripples had just dissipated when I got to the spot he had disappeared. I took a gulp of air and dove under the brownish surface. I tried to open my eyes, but the filthy water stung and I couldn't see more than an inch in front of me. I felt around blindly and frantically.…

    • 432 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    My heart stopped, and suddenly I could not breathe. I was not sure what I had heard was what was actually said. The last thing I remember, I was on the ground, blacked…

    • 456 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    After just four minutes my ship had over 100 men in the water, dead, or wounded. There were ships exploding off in the distance and there was fire everywhere. People were running around and some were jumping into the water. It was complete chaos on the ARIZONA. I had somehow managed to take down two planes, damage five, and kill one pilot. While I was aiming at a plane a bomb hit the first deck of our ship sending me and countless others overboard. I hit the water pretty hard and sunk several feet. I was swimming up to the surface when I heard a noise and saw fire everywhere. When I reached the top of the water I found the USS ARIZONA torn in half. I looked around to find the water filled with swimming sailors and dead bodies.…

    • 777 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    9/11 Narrative Report

    • 737 Words
    • 3 Pages

    It was 8:45 in the morning and I fell asleep before the plane took off. We were supposed to be going to Los Angeles but we were going towards the North Tower but we were in the middle of turning around I dialed 911 and said “Hello police we are on flight eleven Boeing seven hundred sixty-seven and there are five hijackers, four here in the aisles and one flying the plane”.…

    • 737 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    It was morning, but something was not right. I felt strange like my body was not my own. I was in the same room, yet something was different. I got up looked in the mirror and was astonished at what I saw. I felt that what I was looking at could not be a mirror because the images I saw were not of me. I saw a poorly shaven man of about twenty-five staring back at me. He was thin and looked like death had barely escaped him. He was scary, although what scared me the most is thinking about what had happened to…

    • 1390 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Abelardo Monologue

    • 722 Words
    • 3 Pages

    I woke up in bathroom it was pitch black I couldn’t see anything. I tried to look for a light. There was a horrible smell in the room it smelled like rotten eggs. I had a lighter on me so I used it for light I found a door it was covered in blood.…

    • 722 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    I had already jumped off of it many times, but I knew he would be scared to do it. The rock is twenty-five feet above the water, and it was all there. I lept off first. After I rose to the water’s surface I started convincing Chandler to jump. He walked up to the edge of the rock and let his life jacket drop. “Don’t, it’s suicide,” I screamed. He bailed off of the rock and didn’t come up. I waited and waited. He didn’t come up, so I swam back to the boat. I climbed up the boat ladder and sat down. I looked to my right and I saw nothing. I looked to my left and right beside me was Chandler! He had swum under water all the way from the rock to the boat without me noticing. I felt so great because I had successfully taught Chandler how to swim. He thanked me again and again. I had to tip my hat to him because he did something that I couldn’t even do. We packed up the boat and headed home. At the beginning of the day I thought that it would be impossible to teach him, but turns out he was a better swimmer than me the whole…

    • 611 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Everyone is dead. It happened in a moment, one small minute has altered my life. I always told myself life isn't fair, it never has been, but this once I ask for a warning or a sign that I would be spending my last day with my family. Everything was fine for a week after the move here, just like the calm before the storm. Now thanks to one drunk driver I'm left on a hospital bed while the nurses play cards. Talk about sympathy. That monster killed Simon. He was just an innocent kid that dreamed of being a scientist, but that dream will die along with many others. My parents, dead, the two people in the world who have loved me with all their heart for 15 long years are dead in seconds. The drunk could have hit any other car destroyed any…

    • 389 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    I was standing on the roof of a building watching and being a look for the democrat party in Dublin, Ireland. I was on look out as sniper so I could protect our land from the Republican Party and the snipers that they may send out to eliminate us so they could be free from our party. One night when I was on watch I was thinking to myself if this would be the last time I would live to see another day. I was thinking really hard to myself while walking across the roof tops when my eye caught a slight glimpse from the other side of the roof tops a bright little flash. I got a little scared at first and then as fast I could raise my rifle at the other side of the street and aimed at where I saw the flash. I took a deep breath and then let it out a little nervously. I did the same thing again and took a shot. Crack! It broke the…

    • 444 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Hms Challenger Journal

    • 498 Words
    • 2 Pages

    While I was prepping the ship to set sail again before the rain comes, something strange happened. Out of nowhere I was stung by a jelly fish on my foot. I thought nothing of it; I just figured it was just a sting. I finished the last minute preparations and hobbled my way back to the ship to tell the captain. He…

    • 498 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    After we were all on the boat we had to go through a beautiful inlet that lead out into the ocean. We were then instructed on how put our life jackets and harnesses on. The instructor decided that I was going to be the first one to go up in the air. I made my way to the front of the boat and sat down on the deck so he could hook the parachute to my harness. Without a warning he let the parachute go and then I was ascending up into the air almost felt like the speed of light! As I was going up, he shook the line to scare me. Finally when I reached 500 feet, I could see the shore line. It was a breath taking view. I could see giant sea turtles and I even saw a shark. I was in the air about 30 minutes. Then I started descending down. When I was close to the boat, he dunked me into the same water where I had just moments earlier seen the shark and the sea turtles.…

    • 715 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays

Related Topics