Personal Narrative: Sleeping Bear Beaches
The sleeping bear dunes incident This is only half of the hill T
My feet were burning it felt like I was stepping on sand that is on fire. When is this torturous dune climb ever going to be over I thought to myself? “ Are we there yet”my sister Maddie said impatiently. We were going to take a awesome hike through sleeping bear dunes. Then are car came to a stop. We all jumped out of the car and onto the trail. It was beautiful trail wonderful colorful leaves were from every direction. The trees were like a gates welcoming us in saying “hi nice to meet you”. The trail was getting more sand on the path then there it was the 9 most beautiful sight in America! It was a amazing sand dune the water looked crystal clear blue at the bottom so …show more content…
Me feet start to burn and we are not even close. I fall to my knees and instead of climbing it feels like I am falling back. The sand feels like quicksand making me go deeper and deeper in the sand. “When I get to the top of this hill I am going to be so happy I thought to myself”. as “Do need a water bottle to cool down your feet” a girl said “Sure thank you” my dad said
We all sat down and poured the water on our feet. Then I started to pick up speed now we were past half way and almost there. I looked up the wind was started to pick up speed. It felt like needles going right into my skin.”Almost there” I thought to myself. Now I was almost inches away. “Finally” I screamed. I just got to the top of the hill. I sprinted to a bench to sit down then the rest of my family came too. “ Oh my gosh!! Look at this sign” I yelled.
There was a huge sign that we totally missed. It said that the dune was dangerous for younger children and may take you three whole hour to climb back up!
Over all it took us about two hours and thirty minutes. Now on from that day we learned that we should think before we
My feet were burning it felt like I was stepping on sand that is on fire. When is this torturous dune climb ever going to be over I thought to myself? “ Are we there yet”my sister Maddie said impatiently. We were going to take a awesome hike through sleeping bear dunes. Then are car came to a stop. We all jumped out of the car and onto the trail. It was beautiful trail wonderful colorful leaves were from every direction. The trees were like a gates welcoming us in saying “hi nice to meet you”. The trail was getting more sand on the path then there it was the 9 most beautiful sight in America! It was a amazing sand dune the water looked crystal clear blue at the bottom so …show more content…
Me feet start to burn and we are not even close. I fall to my knees and instead of climbing it feels like I am falling back. The sand feels like quicksand making me go deeper and deeper in the sand. “When I get to the top of this hill I am going to be so happy I thought to myself”. as “Do need a water bottle to cool down your feet” a girl said “Sure thank you” my dad said
We all sat down and poured the water on our feet. Then I started to pick up speed now we were past half way and almost there. I looked up the wind was started to pick up speed. It felt like needles going right into my skin.”Almost there” I thought to myself. Now I was almost inches away. “Finally” I screamed. I just got to the top of the hill. I sprinted to a bench to sit down then the rest of my family came too. “ Oh my gosh!! Look at this sign” I yelled.
There was a huge sign that we totally missed. It said that the dune was dangerous for younger children and may take you three whole hour to climb back up!
Over all it took us about two hours and thirty minutes. Now on from that day we learned that we should think before we