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Personal Narrative-The Olive Garden
After 7 ½ hours of school and hard work, I had finally earned the treat of my good grades - The Olive Garden. I had worked super hard in every class and had wanted the olive garden since the week had started I was sitting in my house watching the rain drop in pools right outside my window. My head was drenched from the 5rain and my black hair was falling down my pale but happy face as i waited for my mom to get home. Suddenly I heard my white old squeaky garage opened and from the rain emerged my mom in her silver ford escort car. My face couldn't help but smile as she came in the door to the house with her drenched hair and face. ‘’ Hey mom!’’ I said happy as she entered the door. The look on her face was like she had been mad, and befores …show more content…
‘’Not now’’ said my mom I have lesson plans for my school class and I need to make sure I know what to do tomorrow so that my class goes well. My heart sank so deep into an abyss. I felt the dark soft shadows creep up my spine and whisper in my ear It’s over you will starve. After that I ran upstairs and sat in my room for a while and stared at my posters as a sign of true disappointment. For what seemed like hours after hours after hours I started to crawl under my bed and squeeze my growling stomach tight.

‘’I can’t believe her.’’ I sobbed. ‘’I deserved that after trying so hard,’’ and now I get nothing.’’ After that I heard pounding footsteps barrel up the stairs, and my teenage brat attack sister came in my room and said, ‘’so like mom like felt bad, and like reconsidered or whatever, our dinner so like ya like she wants to like go like now.’’ I could barrelly contain my exitment as the darkness retreated and the light came back into my soul and gave me the heart and energy I need to get up and go down stairs. My mom was waiting in the car when I came down and she had the look of pure sorrow in her eyes, with a splash of embarrassment. ‘’Ok buddy let's go.’’ she said, ‘’and I’m really sorry about earlier I shouldn't

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