Persuasive Sea Fishing

On May 21, 2016 Hannah, Jake, and Brett were on their way to Daytona, Florida for vacation. After traveling several hours they finally arrive, check into a hotel, change and head to the beach. They swam for a little bit, talked, and ate their lunch on the beach. After a while of talking they decided to go deep sea fishing. They paid forty dollars and got on the boat. After an hour of driving they finally got to the spot where they could fish. After fishing for about 30 minutes, a shark hit the boat and Hannah fell out. Jake and Brett call for help but nobody came. They decide that their only choice was to jump out and save her. They got stuck in the underwater current and it pulled them all far away from the boat. They finally got above
They had to try though. It took them ten minutes to get there but they made it. When they arrived they started looking around and found a skeleton with a first aid kit and flare guns with it. They took the supplies and continued to look around. When they found firewood they figured out a place in the middle of the island to build a fort and make a fire to camp for the night and hope that the boat came back in the morning. The later it got, the more the tide was rising but they were on a higher ground so it didn’t reach them. They got through the night but realized they were going to have to do something to keep warm and find a way to get
Hannah went under. Blood was everywhere and she was under for about two minutes, when she came back up, her leg was gone. After reaching the buoy Jake and Brett tried their best to wrap up her leg and stop the bleeding but it wouldn’t stop, she was losing too much blood and they knew they couldn’t save her. After an hour, she was gone. They were devastated but knew they had to try and keep going. They shot off the flare guns but it wasn’t working. Nobody was coming. Trying to figure out where they were was impossible and they couldn’t do it. Just when they thought they were safe for the night, the shark comes up and hit the buoy which sent Brett, Jake, and already dead Hannah flying. Hannah was gone, she had been eaten. Jake and Brett swam as fast as they could to try and get back to the island, but Jake’s fast, just wasn’t fast enough. He was pulled under. Brett screamed and tried to grab him but he was pulled away. Brett reached the island and screamed for Jake but there was no answer. There was no sign, he was just