Shark Diving Persuasive Essay
“Survival can be summed up in three words-Never Give Up-That's the heart of it really”, Bear Grylls
The day was Thursday, October 20th, 2016. Jeff and his friends, Timmy and Bob were going to go on a Boat ride In the Pacific Ocean. The boat they were in was a cabin cruiser, with a small cabin below deck.
A minute later they were packing their few belongings they brought with below deck along with the inflatable raft and a survival pack.
“Let's go,” shouted Timmy
Timmy started the engine and they were flying away. About ten minutes into the ride something went wrong. The engine sputtered then died.
Jeff and Timmy went to get the survival pack and inflatable raft. When they came up Bob was trying to fix the engine when it exploded sending everyone soaring overboard.
Jeff and Timmy were blowing up the raft when they realized that bob wasn’t there. They started to search and …show more content…
It took a minute to take in what was happening. It was a shark. A giant Oceanic whitetip shark. He could recognize the shark because of its short, bluntly-rounded snout and its long body with round fins. He read somewhere in a book that it is considered one of the five most dangerous sharks in the world. He also read that it has a very powerful bite force.
Now fully aware what was happening Jeff grabbed the spear and swam up to the shark. Then he saw Timmy in its jaws.
“NO” yelled Jeff as he jabbed the spear into the shark until it stopped. He grabbed Timmy and tried everything he knew to save Timmy but is was no use, Timmy was gone.
Jeff swam back to the raft to fix everything after the attack. The tarp was ripped to shreds, one of the bottles was gone, the spear was now just a pile of mulch, and the food supply was all gone, all the fish gone. No food no shelter. Everything was lost. Then Jeff saw it, the bright light coming from a search helicopter.
“Over here,” yelled Jeff, even though he knew the pilot saw him. He was safe, finally
The day was Thursday, October 20th, 2016. Jeff and his friends, Timmy and Bob were going to go on a Boat ride In the Pacific Ocean. The boat they were in was a cabin cruiser, with a small cabin below deck.
A minute later they were packing their few belongings they brought with below deck along with the inflatable raft and a survival pack.
“Let's go,” shouted Timmy
Timmy started the engine and they were flying away. About ten minutes into the ride something went wrong. The engine sputtered then died.
Jeff and Timmy went to get the survival pack and inflatable raft. When they came up Bob was trying to fix the engine when it exploded sending everyone soaring overboard.
Jeff and Timmy were blowing up the raft when they realized that bob wasn’t there. They started to search and …show more content…
It took a minute to take in what was happening. It was a shark. A giant Oceanic whitetip shark. He could recognize the shark because of its short, bluntly-rounded snout and its long body with round fins. He read somewhere in a book that it is considered one of the five most dangerous sharks in the world. He also read that it has a very powerful bite force.
Now fully aware what was happening Jeff grabbed the spear and swam up to the shark. Then he saw Timmy in its jaws.
“NO” yelled Jeff as he jabbed the spear into the shark until it stopped. He grabbed Timmy and tried everything he knew to save Timmy but is was no use, Timmy was gone.
Jeff swam back to the raft to fix everything after the attack. The tarp was ripped to shreds, one of the bottles was gone, the spear was now just a pile of mulch, and the food supply was all gone, all the fish gone. No food no shelter. Everything was lost. Then Jeff saw it, the bright light coming from a search helicopter.
“Over here,” yelled Jeff, even though he knew the pilot saw him. He was safe, finally