Postpartum Scenarios
Prenatal and Postpartum Scenario
(indent) This memo will address the basic activities that women should consider when pregnant and post pregnancy. In order to (from Write Point: [Writing suggestion--the meaning will be the same (and less wordy) by removing "in order"]) promote a healthy lifestyle and a baby’s healthy development, a mother must create a healthy environment for her child.
Prenatal Women
Daily Activity List • Regular doctor visits (beginning between 6-8) (from Write Point: [Write out numbers under 10]) • Eat a balanced diet • Exercise for a minimum of 30 minutes everyday (from Write Point: [Check spelling: "everyday" is an adjective meaning common or ordinary (This is an everyday sweatshirt); "every day" means …show more content…
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Explanation
first doctor’s appointment should be between weeks six and eight. The doctor will run blood test and will prescribe prenatal vitamins. Taking these prenatal vitamins will help your baby’s brain and spinal cord develop. Regular doctor visits can prevent diabetes, preeclampsia, anemia, and other infectious diseases. Preventing these diseases is very (informal) important to encourage healthy prenatal development. Eating a balanced diet will provide your child with the necessary nutrients while getting adequate sleep can prevent the mother from additional stress.
Exercise will help a woman prepare her body for delivery. Stretching, moderate cardiovascular, and moderate strength exercise will promote healthy muscles and joints.
According to the directions, you were to make sure that your explanation is based on developmental theory. Unfortunately, I see nothing about a developmental theory in this …show more content…
Try "...should begin gradually" or "gradually should begin"]) a mother should gradually begin moderate-intensity aerobic activity such as walking. If a mother exercises, a child will be more likely to continue the same behavior. Eating a balanced diet will promote milk production and will give you the strength to care for your baby. Breastfeeding not only helps a mother loose (from Write Point: [Check spelling--This is a verb meaning to make "not tight." "Lose" means to fail to keep or possess]) excess baby weight, but also (from Write Point: [Remove comma (if the following is not an independent clause or last element in a series)]) encourages a healthy bond between mother and child.
According to the directions, you were to make sure that your explanation is based on developmental theory. Unfortunately, I see nothing about a developmental theory in this section.
(indent) This memo will address the basic activities that women should consider when pregnant and post pregnancy. In order to (from Write Point: [Writing suggestion--the meaning will be the same (and less wordy) by removing "in order"]) promote a healthy lifestyle and a baby’s healthy development, a mother must create a healthy environment for her child.
Prenatal Women
Daily Activity List • Regular doctor visits (beginning between 6-8) (from Write Point: [Write out numbers under 10]) • Eat a balanced diet • Exercise for a minimum of 30 minutes everyday (from Write Point: [Check spelling: "everyday" is an adjective meaning common or ordinary (This is an everyday sweatshirt); "every day" means …show more content…
Without a citation, a reader does not know from where the information originated and cannot find the resource to verify the information.
Explanation
first doctor’s appointment should be between weeks six and eight. The doctor will run blood test and will prescribe prenatal vitamins. Taking these prenatal vitamins will help your baby’s brain and spinal cord develop. Regular doctor visits can prevent diabetes, preeclampsia, anemia, and other infectious diseases. Preventing these diseases is very (informal) important to encourage healthy prenatal development. Eating a balanced diet will provide your child with the necessary nutrients while getting adequate sleep can prevent the mother from additional stress.
Exercise will help a woman prepare her body for delivery. Stretching, moderate cardiovascular, and moderate strength exercise will promote healthy muscles and joints.
According to the directions, you were to make sure that your explanation is based on developmental theory. Unfortunately, I see nothing about a developmental theory in this …show more content…
Try "...should begin gradually" or "gradually should begin"]) a mother should gradually begin moderate-intensity aerobic activity such as walking. If a mother exercises, a child will be more likely to continue the same behavior. Eating a balanced diet will promote milk production and will give you the strength to care for your baby. Breastfeeding not only helps a mother loose (from Write Point: [Check spelling--This is a verb meaning to make "not tight." "Lose" means to fail to keep or possess]) excess baby weight, but also (from Write Point: [Remove comma (if the following is not an independent clause or last element in a series)]) encourages a healthy bond between mother and child.
According to the directions, you were to make sure that your explanation is based on developmental theory. Unfortunately, I see nothing about a developmental theory in this section.