Upland, CA 91786-5238
August, 31 2013
Bryant Palazzi
1682 Meadowlark Ln
Sunnyvale, CA 94087-4847
Dear Mr. Palazzi:
Greetings, I am Sthefany Young editor in chief of Cloud Nine Magazine, I would like to thank you for your poetry submission for Cloud Nine Magazine.
The poem “She Walks in Beauty” has been accepted. This poem is appropriate to Cloud Nine Magazine because this magazine relates to the audience who are in love with someone as well as people who are in a relationship with their loved one. This poem would attract a reader who is at the moment in love with someone and have no words to describe their love towards that one special person. The poem reveals the feelings of a man who is deeply in love with a woman; the way her expressions and body convey to what made this man fall in love. The man expresses his ingenuous love towards the woman and explains her innocent heart which is full of love. As I was reading the poem I was able to comprehend his true love towards this woman as he provided the poem with figurative language which gave me a mental illustration of the woman he loves. As well as the structure in which this poem was written; the poem has in order to describe the important aspects of this special woman. He gave details to the reasons in which made him fall in love with the woman and shows that this woman has this man in Cloud Nine.
I think that this poem is an excellent source to capture the attention of someone who is deeply in love with someone. The poem provides excellent description and allows for the reader to full understand the meaning of this poem. This poem makes the reader to think of that person they love and to fully admire the way that person is.
Sincerely yours,
Sthefany Young
Sthefany Young
Chief in editor- Cloud Nine Magazine