This response letter belongs to Raquel Goodluck’s Story “Help Her.” The story is about a girl named Rae being home alone for the weekend, and she is stuck on a very creepy and mysterious situation. The story’s theme involves mysterious around the normal things of us, and the minimum of what we know of our surroundings. The story is very simple to follow and very direct. I believe this is very effective for me, it focuses only in the important parts. As a very direct person, I enjoyed it. I liked how the setting was described between narration and the mother. It works very well when the information is given in different ways. It makes the reader invested more in the story. The last thing that works in the story, is the whole mystery rewarding