In the first line, the words “dank as a ditch,” are an example of a simile that brings some clarity to the cellar because now there is something to compare it with. Since the reader knows that a ditch collects water and maybe even smells, it becomes clear that this isn’t a clean cellar, it is dirty and wet. The second line uses a bit of alliteration (bulbs, broke, boxes), to further illustrate the
In the first line, the words “dank as a ditch,” are an example of a simile that brings some clarity to the cellar because now there is something to compare it with. Since the reader knows that a ditch collects water and maybe even smells, it becomes clear that this isn’t a clean cellar, it is dirty and wet. The second line uses a bit of alliteration (bulbs, broke, boxes), to further illustrate the