Salvation Alway Analysis

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“Salvation”
The narrator of the story is named Langston. He cried at the end
I believe these two inspection was included in the story to show the readers how tough it is to get in the United States with illegal thing from Mexico and without being a United States Citizen leaving Mexico. Casares choose to record the conversation between the border patrol agent and the team because she was member of the porter nation. She wished them good luck which gave them great warm feelings. Casares wanted to show that not all mexican-american are illegal workers or illegal immigrates. The audience reaction is probably shocked at the stops and process the mexican-americans have to go through just because they are mexican looking. The Coppell team supporter judged the Porter team for being less than