So I Aint No Good Girl Analysis
The not so good Relationship
In “So I ain’t no good girl” by Sharon Flake gives you clues about a girl and how she and her boyfriend have relationship problems. Raheem (the boyfriend) is very abusive. Raheem has and wants control over everything. The way they both act it seems like it was not not meant to be. As if they were not supposed to be together. The story is an “ok” book. The characters are good characters. Based on this information the characters could be much more open about themselves and how they feel. Raheem needs to have less self-esteem on his self. The characters needs to be more confident, less self-esteem, and more open. If Raheem changes how he acts, the story may actually be better. Raheem and the girl need to change how they both act. So “I aint no good girl’ by Sharon Flake is a marvelous story. But the characters are too scared and too selfish; they just need to be better.
One thing these characters need is to be open. The girl shows fear. She needs to be open and tell Raheem how she feels. They are not open to, or towards each other. The girl mainly acts petrified of him and herself. For example, like in paragraph 17she backs down and does not say what she wanted to tell him. Raheem threatened the girl making her really scared. The way …show more content…
How they both are acting is not good and not a good way. They need to be more open and with each other. They don’t really tell each other how they feel or anything. The relationship between them was an abusment relationship. Neither one of them was able to be thereselves. Then to where Raheem had so much self-esteem. He had way to much to where it was hard for them to communicate. So the story “So I aint no good girl” by Sharon Flake is magnificent. But I think that the characters would be better. The way they are made is kind of weird. Raheem needs a lot of work and so does the girl. Other than that the characters are good. And the story was a perfect story to
In “So I ain’t no good girl” by Sharon Flake gives you clues about a girl and how she and her boyfriend have relationship problems. Raheem (the boyfriend) is very abusive. Raheem has and wants control over everything. The way they both act it seems like it was not not meant to be. As if they were not supposed to be together. The story is an “ok” book. The characters are good characters. Based on this information the characters could be much more open about themselves and how they feel. Raheem needs to have less self-esteem on his self. The characters needs to be more confident, less self-esteem, and more open. If Raheem changes how he acts, the story may actually be better. Raheem and the girl need to change how they both act. So “I aint no good girl’ by Sharon Flake is a marvelous story. But the characters are too scared and too selfish; they just need to be better.
One thing these characters need is to be open. The girl shows fear. She needs to be open and tell Raheem how she feels. They are not open to, or towards each other. The girl mainly acts petrified of him and herself. For example, like in paragraph 17she backs down and does not say what she wanted to tell him. Raheem threatened the girl making her really scared. The way …show more content…
How they both are acting is not good and not a good way. They need to be more open and with each other. They don’t really tell each other how they feel or anything. The relationship between them was an abusment relationship. Neither one of them was able to be thereselves. Then to where Raheem had so much self-esteem. He had way to much to where it was hard for them to communicate. So the story “So I aint no good girl” by Sharon Flake is magnificent. But I think that the characters would be better. The way they are made is kind of weird. Raheem needs a lot of work and so does the girl. Other than that the characters are good. And the story was a perfect story to