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Who Am I Without Him By Sharon Flake Analysis
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In the story ''Who am i without him'' written by Sharon Flake, these characters have a weird realationship and i know that someone in this world have had this same problem. This story is about a girl and a boy named Raheem, they are at the bus stop talking but, Raheeem keeps looking at other girls. His girlfriend get's mad but, she backs away because, he was going to hit her and when she gets on the bus she see's him kissing another girl and does nothing about it. The characters both have weaknesses and strengths. The girl weakness is that she keeps going for the boy even when he treats her wrong. ''Raheem hand smashes the words back into my mouth''. ''Girl don;t make me''... The girl strengths are she can stand up
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