In School’s Out for Summer Anna Quindlen did a good job of getting her point across to the reader. She portrayed her ideas very neatly and used some statistics to back up her conclusion. In Quindlen’s essay she went through many solutions to bandage up the hunger of several children during the summer.
Anna’s thesis clearly stated what she was going to talk about throughout her essay. In her first paragraph she talks about what people don’t really seem to notice, that people really do go hungry in America. She opens her essay up nicely to what she is going to talk about during the rest of her essay. She focuses on what she is going to talk about and never goes off topic. She uses textual evidence