“Personality becomes increasingly more solidified over time, so problematic behaviors, such as violence, are more easily treated when an individual is at an earlier developmental level. This belief has lead increasing interest in studying children…
Rhetorical Precis Paul Thompson in the article, “Startling Finds On Teenage Brains” states that human brain of any young teenager is far from adulthood. Thompson supports his statement by first describing the research they have done on a teenagers and childrens brains. He then explains that Teens have a massive loss of brain tissue and brain cells and connections are being lost in the areas of controlling impulses these frontal lobes inhibit our violent actions (stated in paragraph 7). Thompson’s purpose is to inform the reader that teens brains haven't matured yet so that readers understand that teens don't understand what they're doing. The author writes in a formal for adults.…
n the article, “Startling Finds on Teenage Brains” the author was very bias, and only talked about what he believed to be true and right, that teenagers have massive losses of brain tissue in areas of self control which almost is the cause to teenagers impulsive actions and committing crimes. I disagree with the author on this statement for reasoning why teenagers act the way they do, he uses this as an excuse. Teenagers must have always loss brain tissue, and just because they lose some self control, that does not make it okay to go out and kill someone or commit and henious crime. Even with loss of brain tissue teenagers and kids know the difference from right and wrong. All teenagers should know the seriousness of what they have committed,…
In the Article “Startling Finds on Teenage Brains” by Paul Thompson his opinion on kids committing murder is a hard subject to dissect however he claims that their brain tissue loss can not be an excuse for the murder they commit. For example, he stated “what really caught our eye was the massive loss of brain tissue that occurs in the teenage years.” (paragraph 7)This shows the reader that he comes from his personal research to show much of the brain is lost in adolescents. Another good source of ethos he provides is “My group at UCLA and our colleagues at the National Institute of Health have developed technology to track the growth of the brain. ”(paragraph 5)…
The Article is based on facts and applied research. Im not a scientist so I cant agree or disagree. However I do find it baffling that there is so much study of the brain that goes unseen. Its unbelieved to think how many hours, days, months researchers put in time to find or come up with different ways to uncover the brain. I think I…
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Therefore, the inhumane studies performed on Reimer throughout his childhood not only represent the adverse effects cruelty can provide on the human mind, but how forcing psychological treatments will only break a person down. According to our book, the way a human evolves from birth to adulthood depends on various variables. First, it all has to do with the environment we are raised on. In Reimer’s situation, it seemed to be inevitably forced to an impoverished environment leading unmotivated improvements in the cerebral cortex. Furthermore, peer influence as well as parental guidance encourages us to develop into what we become as we reach adulthood. Unfortunately, in Reimer’s situation both doctors, as well as family members contributed to this experiment. Only until the age of about 13, Reimer threatened his parents that if he was to see doctor Money again he will commit suicide. Lastly a since doctor Money used hormones on Reimer in order for him to develop feminine like characteristics only physically displayed them, but psychologically Reimer rejected the forced gender and eventually identified himself as a young man. This failed experiment concludes us to the belief that Nature and Nurture work together in the development of the human…
In Greg Ousley’s case, a teenager who murdered his parents at the age of 14, Greg told his mother that, “He was scared, that all he never thought about was murder and suicide,” but instead of worrying about her son, his mother reacted, “...and as soon as I say back, she takes her hand off my back...and walks out the room.” (Scott Anderson) Normally, other parents will ask their child immediately if they discover that their child is acting abormal, but in Greg’s family, it is totally opposite. The lacking of care and love from parents led to the crime committed by Greg. Nowadays, the result from the science experiment about teenager’s brain is…
Her primary audience is people who once thought that their teenagers were manipulating and disrespecting them because of a trend. Strauch appeals to her audience’s logos by giving real life situations of other parents of teenagers, and several quotes from them also. She gives them logic by not only providing quotes from parents, but also provides quotes from teenagers and gets their mind frame of the current situation. Her ideas are also heavily supported by scientific evidence. She puts several facts about the human brain and how it changes and functions during adolescent years, stating how several parts of the brain are directly correlated to behavior and thinking in teens. She informs her readers that her information is credible, since she is a science editor, she receives several articles from neurologists about new information and discoveries about the teenage…
There are several reasons why juveniles commit crimes and act up. Some of these can be explained by theories or in other words educated guesses. Although theories are only educated guesses they can be used to decide why juvenile delinquents come through the court systems. Theories can be helpful in determining why children or teenagers become a criminal. It also helps to determine what can help deter crimes by juveniles. In this essay theories will be explained that could fit some of the children in the following case studies.…
During the teenage years, the teenage brain loses brain tissue in areas that control thoughts, actions, and emotions. This explains the unreasonable thoughts and actions that occur within the teenage years. With that in mind, Greg’s household environment had changed during his teenage years after his siblings had moved out. When Greg was the only child left in the household, he became “ the central focus of the parents’ abuse and or attention” (Anderson 34). Greg became the victim of his mother’s rages and “ convinced that his father’s remoteness was less a sign of disinterest in him than outright disgust” (Anderson 43), The young teenager believed that his father was disgusted of his physical appearance and lack of athletic ability. In addition, Greg saw his family life deteriorate after he caught his mother cheat on his father. His relationship with his mother had gone to blackmailing. In only seven months as the only child in the house, Greg told his friends that he will kill his parents. Eventually, Greg developed the process of ideation or by which a disturbed individual moves from despair toward a plan of action. At a young age, these events that Greg had experienced are psychologically damaging and explains Greg’s motives to killing his…
Additionally, Thompson justifies the massive loss of brain tissue during adolescent’s years; they are still under development and shouldn’t be evaluated as a whole (Thompson, 2001). Jennifer Jenkins in her article “On Punishment and Teen Killers” asserts that she does not accept the “underdeveloped brain” argument, because she solemnly believes that if that were the reason, then teens would all have the urge to kill at roughly identical rates all over the world .Her argumentative opinion is hasty generalizing since she is presuming that all teenagers are alike and will be tempted to commit murder. Brains grow and change at different paces according to Thompson’s research group at the University of California, Los Angeles were they have developed technology to map the patterns of brain in individual children and teens…
Children are not able to think like adults they may commit the same crime as adults but not emotionally and cognitively capable of understanding their action. Jean Piaget (1896-1980) a psychologist employed at the Binet Institute in the 1920’s became intrigue with how children think when ask certain question that require to use logical thinking, as an results the children gave incorrect answers. These tests were constructed to reveal the different cognitive abilities…
Adolescents’ comparative developmental immaturity contributes to immature decision and criminal behavior with poor decision making, not thinking about the future, giving in to peer pressure, risk taking, unformed identity, impulsivity and self-control. Nathaniel Brazill, age 14 when he committed the crime, and was convicted of first-degree murder facing life in prison without parole. When confronting a Florida grand jury, Brazill would often look confused, when the verdicts were being read. Giving the fact that juveniles are incapable to stand trail. Assistant professor Paul Thompson of neurology at the University of…
Teens do not think the same as an adult. It has been proven the prefrontal cortex is still developing in teen's brain. Since the prefrontal cortex is still developing the brain it relies on the amygdala, which is associated with emotions, impulses, aggression and instinctive behaviour. Teen should be given a second chance to rehabilitate in society. “In terms of cognitive development, as research on the human brain has shown, Brazil and any other young teen is far from adulthood”,(“Startling Finds on Teenage Brains” by Paul Thompson). Teens don't have the reasoning power of adults. Teens are mentally,emotionally unable to be an adult.”These frontal lobes, which inhibit our violent passions, rash actions, and regulate our emotions, are vastly immature throughout the teenage years”,(Startling Finds on Teenage Brains” by Paul Thompson). Humans loss brain tissue during teenage years. This juvenile didn't mentally understand the output or think about what they did before they did the crime and should receive help from a medical…