Heemanaathan S/O K Mukaya (1122701354) Ravishen S/O K Kumaran (1122701336)
Nagananthanan S/O Segar (1122701762)
Balaganapathy S/O Vasanthan (1121117421)
Topic
Is technology a major problem in 21st century.
Thesis
Although information technology is beneficial in our lives, we must lessen the use of it because it contributes to laziness, violates one’s privacy, it invents dangerous things.
Topic sentence
I. Technology contribute to laziness. A. Students tend to copy and paste information’s. 1. Students browse internet to get detail’s rather than borrowing books from library and reads it one by one. 2. Students do not clarify whether details that they took from these websites are from a reliable source B. Peoples prefer e-shopping 3. People’s prefer buy things that they prefer via online without knowing the quality and trustworthy of the seller of the product. 4. Some people’s who are too dependant on online shopping, buy products without knowing whether its allowed in our country by government.
II. Technology violates one’s privacy. A. Social network 1. We can post humiliate others via online post such as facebook,twitter and google plus. 2. When brief details about their where about and instant updates about their daily activities n a particular person’s facebook profile can lead to robbery or even murder. B. Online services 3. Most of the bank customers using online banking systems to do their payments online rather than paying at the service center, but they are unaware of the new devices that can fetch whatever information’s that is being typed. 4. E-mails that being used by many peoples shared via few companies, where they get the e-mail’s through online job application and survey’s, where