Technology Destroys Human Activities
Part one:
Issue: technology destroys human activities
The writers Point of view is to stop worshipping the machines that have enslaved us
Reasons:
Positives * We adore technology and so we are its slaves * Technology has replaced workers * Technology controls our lives, we do what technology tells us * Like a heavy blanket, technology is stifling communication, physical exercise and healthy living * Young people write in code like foreign language when text messaging, soon young people will forget how to write in standard English * There are too many fat kids and fat adulate * New technology is basic cause of obesity * University researchers report that in the 1950s,48.5% of workers in Australia rode bicycles , walked, * Now people drive their cars, that is not good for health and the environment * Technology destroys some worthwhile human activities
Negative: None
Part two:
In the article slaves to technology which appeared in signe Wilkinson Editorial cartoon on 2007 the writer Karen Lui argues that we human are nowadays control by technology. She use critical tone making the reader to feel that we human being completely depend on technology. Imaginary image of cartoon has been used to make the reader realize how technology wastes our precious time. The writer’s main contention is we human should stop adoration of technology.
The writer has focussed on exclusive language to strengthen his argument by directly involving the reader in the issue in the phrase “we adore technology and so we are its slaves”. The phrase would make the reader feel that he or she is also affected by the use of “technology”. The writer has developed his argument by saying that technology has changed the way people communicate, exercise and live and also she use imaginary image of cartoon to make the reader realize how technology waste our precious time . In contrast the writer has uses generalization in the phrase “in the 19th century,
Issue: technology destroys human activities
The writers Point of view is to stop worshipping the machines that have enslaved us
Reasons:
Positives * We adore technology and so we are its slaves * Technology has replaced workers * Technology controls our lives, we do what technology tells us * Like a heavy blanket, technology is stifling communication, physical exercise and healthy living * Young people write in code like foreign language when text messaging, soon young people will forget how to write in standard English * There are too many fat kids and fat adulate * New technology is basic cause of obesity * University researchers report that in the 1950s,48.5% of workers in Australia rode bicycles , walked, * Now people drive their cars, that is not good for health and the environment * Technology destroys some worthwhile human activities
Negative: None
Part two:
In the article slaves to technology which appeared in signe Wilkinson Editorial cartoon on 2007 the writer Karen Lui argues that we human are nowadays control by technology. She use critical tone making the reader to feel that we human being completely depend on technology. Imaginary image of cartoon has been used to make the reader realize how technology wastes our precious time. The writer’s main contention is we human should stop adoration of technology.
The writer has focussed on exclusive language to strengthen his argument by directly involving the reader in the issue in the phrase “we adore technology and so we are its slaves”. The phrase would make the reader feel that he or she is also affected by the use of “technology”. The writer has developed his argument by saying that technology has changed the way people communicate, exercise and live and also she use imaginary image of cartoon to make the reader realize how technology waste our precious time . In contrast the writer has uses generalization in the phrase “in the 19th century,