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The Irreplaceable Piece: Maxine Merit
The Irreplaceable Piece Vulnerability. This was something that caused Maxine Merit so much conflict, it often left her wondering why her heat has yet to wither away and relinquish. Strength was something that Maxine lacked and all of her problems came when she found the one who she assumed that she could love and cherish with all of her heart. The one who was her other half, the one who fit into her. But it always seemed to be wrong in everything she believes in because a broken heart shoved the truth in her face so suddenly she did not know what to do. With a broken heart so damaged, nothing could have dragged her out of the inescapable darkness that enveloped her. No amount of medication can heal the broken, no amount of fixed smiles …show more content…
All this broken-heartedness caused her so much grief, she found herself shoved and trapped in between four white walls. With a silence so piercing, the voices inside of her head screamed at her and kept her company. They were her only friends and unlike everyone else, they never seemed to leave her. They wouldn’t dare. She was all alone in this god-forsaken room and she was bounded like a prisoner, the only human she has really seen for god knows how long was a lank and pale woman who dropped by with her much-needed necessities. Maxine loathed her however because she knows of this woman's true intentions. She was trying to take away her only true friends. The woman who went by the foolish name of Dr.Embezzle tried to take the very thing that kept Maxine alive and sane. When she thought back to what made her this way she wanted to laugh at her own foolishness. She could still see …show more content…
Live a little!” Patel playfully smacked Maxine on the arm causing her to wrap her arms around herself and shiver. Thinking back on it, Maxine should have yelled and scolded her in contempt. Her eyes flickered towards the opposite end of the lake and they widened as they casted upon a figure. It seemed like a shadow at first glance but she was terribly mistaken. It was him. The wind lifted his ashy brown hair and the sunlight’ beam glistened off his tanned skin. But that was not what caught her eye, no, it was, however, his own. His radiating orbs were a deep violet that held a mysterious disposition. Her heart had skipped a beat when his beautiful eyes suddenly locked upon hers and it seemed as if the entire world halted and shattered all she could see was him. His jaw tightened and his violet pupils dilated before he suddenly straightened up and turned his back to her. He walked into the dark depths of the ostensibly never-ending forest. Maxine's’ brows lifted in curiosity and, for whatever reason, desired to follow this mysterious creature. Maxine was never a girl to do anything out of the ordinary; she was very mundane. She also did not know what force caused her to open her mouth and

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