The most important person in your life
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Junior Composition
Prof. Albano
September 29, 2014
Pre-Writing
1. List 3 significant people
My grandmother
Mother
High school teacher
2. Choose 1 of the 3: My grandmother
3. Select 3to 5 adjectives to describe the person: She was responsible, kindness and patient.
4. For each adjective write a paragraph.
A. responsible:
My grandmother took care of me when I was young. Because my mother have a job in day. I remember at that time, my grandmother was not only wanted to take care of me, she had a small vendor in front of our home. Sometimes she was very busy, but she also took a good care of me. She did not let me hungry and let me get any hurt. I think she was a responsible person, because she would do everything as well as she can.
B. kindness:
My grandmother was a kindness person in my memory. She always smiles to others and she was seldom angry to people around her. When she was working at vendor, she was kindness and polite to every customer. Although she was very busy. Every afternoon, she would come to kindergarten and took me home. When she saw my classmates, she always chatted with them just like their grandmother. She could let everyone felt the love and tender, there was the reason that I think she was kindness.
C. patient:
My grandmother was a patient person. When I was young, I often did something wrong, but she never fault me at once. She would tell me what I should do and pay attention at the next time. She told me and taught me again and again. I never felt she had any inpatient for me. She was very patient not only to her family, but also to her job.
5. Choose one of the adjective that is the dominant impression: Responsible
6. Free-writing
7. How is she significant to you?
My grandmother left us when I was seven years old. That is the saddest moment in my life. Before she left us, she took care of me every day when my mother works in day. On one weekend afternoon, my grandmother wanted to prepare lunch for me.
Junior Composition
Prof. Albano
September 29, 2014
Pre-Writing
1. List 3 significant people
My grandmother
Mother
High school teacher
2. Choose 1 of the 3: My grandmother
3. Select 3to 5 adjectives to describe the person: She was responsible, kindness and patient.
4. For each adjective write a paragraph.
A. responsible:
My grandmother took care of me when I was young. Because my mother have a job in day. I remember at that time, my grandmother was not only wanted to take care of me, she had a small vendor in front of our home. Sometimes she was very busy, but she also took a good care of me. She did not let me hungry and let me get any hurt. I think she was a responsible person, because she would do everything as well as she can.
B. kindness:
My grandmother was a kindness person in my memory. She always smiles to others and she was seldom angry to people around her. When she was working at vendor, she was kindness and polite to every customer. Although she was very busy. Every afternoon, she would come to kindergarten and took me home. When she saw my classmates, she always chatted with them just like their grandmother. She could let everyone felt the love and tender, there was the reason that I think she was kindness.
C. patient:
My grandmother was a patient person. When I was young, I often did something wrong, but she never fault me at once. She would tell me what I should do and pay attention at the next time. She told me and taught me again and again. I never felt she had any inpatient for me. She was very patient not only to her family, but also to her job.
5. Choose one of the adjective that is the dominant impression: Responsible
6. Free-writing
7. How is she significant to you?
My grandmother left us when I was seven years old. That is the saddest moment in my life. Before she left us, she took care of me every day when my mother works in day. On one weekend afternoon, my grandmother wanted to prepare lunch for me.