The Pack Descriptive Writing

The Pack I looked around me, taking in the inky blackness of my surroundings, the scent of my brothers, sisters, and mother before I feel the warm, soft touch of my mother's’ tongue cleansing me. I whine, hungrily, and start to look for an open teat in which to get food from. I finally found one and begin sucking desperately before one of my siblings can take it, and sigh at the taste of the milk. I feel the warmth that is my mother and siblings around me and fall asleep, thinking that it would last forever. I wake up to the cold, nipping at my skin beneath my fur. I sigh, knowing that the warmth and the milk is a distant memory and that it was all part of my dream. I’ve been having those kinds of visions ever since I was left alone in the cold, cruel world to fend for myself, which I have been doing quite well. I yawn and shake the sleepiness from my limbs, eager to see what awaits me today. I look around, the snow crisp and bright after the blizzard. Wait, I forgot to introduce myself, I am Eclipse. My mother called me Eclipse because of how rare it is to find or have a wolf with all black fur and red eyes.One day, she thought I ran off or got took
I go forward and jump at it, surprising it and its herd, sending them into a stampede, right at the wolf pack. But I don’t notice as I separate and chase the elk. Sooner than I expected, the elk slows and comes to a complete stop. I tackle it and deliver a deadly bite to its throat. As I am fixing to gorge myself in the elk when I hear footsteps coming toward me, fast. Running fast. I look behind me and, sure enough, the pack is coming for me. I lay low to the ground and slink into a nearby bush. When the pack arrives, they sniff around the elk. What I assume to be the alpha wolf followed the scent trail up to me and growled, knowing I was in there because of her excellent sense of smell. I curse silently to myself, wishing that I would have hidden my