reading was well structured. Foer starts of by stating the main claim which is “the consensus on globalization changed considerably--- for obvious reasons”(Foer 640) . He try’s to demonstrate that by using soccer and everything around it, like the fans, players and strategies. Then goes to demonstrate how soccer explains the American culture wars. He starts of by giving his description about his soccer career which is his personal evidence. Toward the end, he states the source evidence. Which helps Foer make his point. Overall people should not use personal experience in your academic work because everyone has different experiences. No one goes through the same trouble or has the same results during an experiment. It’s difficult to support your main claim that way. For example, Foer did a great job putting his personal experience in his work because he was able to support it with source evidence or even fine example in which they can relate too. The way his able to use soccer to show globalization changed considerably after 2001 is great because soccer was created in another country.
reading was well structured. Foer starts of by stating the main claim which is “the consensus on globalization changed considerably--- for obvious reasons”(Foer 640) . He try’s to demonstrate that by using soccer and everything around it, like the fans, players and strategies. Then goes to demonstrate how soccer explains the American culture wars. He starts of by giving his description about his soccer career which is his personal evidence. Toward the end, he states the source evidence. Which helps Foer make his point. Overall people should not use personal experience in your academic work because everyone has different experiences. No one goes through the same trouble or has the same results during an experiment. It’s difficult to support your main claim that way. For example, Foer did a great job putting his personal experience in his work because he was able to support it with source evidence or even fine example in which they can relate too. The way his able to use soccer to show globalization changed considerably after 2001 is great because soccer was created in another country.