Unstoppable: 5, 000 Years Ago: Analysis
Unstoppable 5,000 Years Ago
Part One Jaron of Sparta walked among the shattered bones of his enemies, as their blood slowly tainted the sand. All of his men had been slain by the Roman legion. They fought well, may their souls rest in peace knowing that they served their king well. As Jaron walked throug¬h the city he saw the coliseum he said “Sick people, killing for their amusement” he continued walking through the city, he walked over to an olive tree, drew his sword, then he said “ I never liked olives”, then he split the tree in half with his sword. “Leonidas is going to like this one”, thinking of the three other kingdoms his army took over. Jaron finally reached his destination and said “ Julius Ceaser come out and face me …show more content…
It took Jaron and his men two days to reach Rome and they said if they were not back within 6 days there would be a search party for him. It had been seven days so they should be here by now, Jaron had been fasting for the war so he was starving now. He fell to the ground; he fainted of starvation that was the last thing that he remembered. When Jaron woke up he saw Ceaser and then Ceaser said “here drink this, its ambrosia, it’ll make you feel better.” It took Jaron a minute to recover his senses and when he did he said “Thank you, for saving me why did you?” Jaron said. Ceaser replied “Because you spared my life so I owed you.” Ceaser said. Jaron took the ambrosia and drank it. King Leonidas came out of the door of the sanatorium he said “Jaron my friend how are you feeling?” he asked. “Bbbbbeter” that was all Jaron could say before he saw the powder in the bottom of the cup he had been …show more content…
I have many other powers also I can make fireballs, summon monsters and lightning, and lastly I can do all of this with bare hands. Some of the monsters I can summon are zombies, phoenixes, minotaurs and the best I have been able to do so far is Dragons. This may seem cool but it kind of sucks because it HURTS, the fire and lightning burns my hands and it leaves scorch marks. Also with the summoning it takes up a lot of my energy and I almost faint every time I do it. And it is kind of weird looking at myself in a mirror because I have pointed
Part One Jaron of Sparta walked among the shattered bones of his enemies, as their blood slowly tainted the sand. All of his men had been slain by the Roman legion. They fought well, may their souls rest in peace knowing that they served their king well. As Jaron walked throug¬h the city he saw the coliseum he said “Sick people, killing for their amusement” he continued walking through the city, he walked over to an olive tree, drew his sword, then he said “ I never liked olives”, then he split the tree in half with his sword. “Leonidas is going to like this one”, thinking of the three other kingdoms his army took over. Jaron finally reached his destination and said “ Julius Ceaser come out and face me …show more content…
It took Jaron and his men two days to reach Rome and they said if they were not back within 6 days there would be a search party for him. It had been seven days so they should be here by now, Jaron had been fasting for the war so he was starving now. He fell to the ground; he fainted of starvation that was the last thing that he remembered. When Jaron woke up he saw Ceaser and then Ceaser said “here drink this, its ambrosia, it’ll make you feel better.” It took Jaron a minute to recover his senses and when he did he said “Thank you, for saving me why did you?” Jaron said. Ceaser replied “Because you spared my life so I owed you.” Ceaser said. Jaron took the ambrosia and drank it. King Leonidas came out of the door of the sanatorium he said “Jaron my friend how are you feeling?” he asked. “Bbbbbeter” that was all Jaron could say before he saw the powder in the bottom of the cup he had been …show more content…
I have many other powers also I can make fireballs, summon monsters and lightning, and lastly I can do all of this with bare hands. Some of the monsters I can summon are zombies, phoenixes, minotaurs and the best I have been able to do so far is Dragons. This may seem cool but it kind of sucks because it HURTS, the fire and lightning burns my hands and it leaves scorch marks. Also with the summoning it takes up a lot of my energy and I almost faint every time I do it. And it is kind of weird looking at myself in a mirror because I have pointed