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What Happened To Dr. Newtown's Success Or Failure?
“Yes Dr. Newtown, please proceed with this new surgery. I can’t see one more day how people look at my little girl. They don’t know how much she struggles everyday to just survive. It is not her fault that she was born this way. It is for this reason that we have to change her…you have to change my daughter and make her into the beautiful human being.” Jacob stared crying and gave full consent into proceeding with the surgery.
“She is going to be fine, I know she will. There is not one reason why this would fail. Science never fails; science is perfection. I know that you daughter will become normal and she will be like any other girl. ” Dr. Newtown could not hide his happiness. He knew that this medical experimentation could elevate his position
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Dr. Newtown and other twenty doctors stood in front of Jane’s bed. Rebecca and Jacob were each holding Jane’s hand from the side of her bed. Jane felt a chill going through her whole body.
“Jane sit up,” Dr. Newton said with a nervous tone of voice.
Jane raised her hands toward her father like she always had. Jacob opened his arms…
“No! She will do it by herself, she is normal like a real person”
Jacob nodded and put his arms down. Jane looked around and fear not being able to sit up. Her heart was beating faster and the room got quiet. Jane used her arms for support and tried to obey her doctors’ orders.
“I knew it! We have done something extraordinary fellows” Dr. Newtown hugged his colleagues while Jacob, Rebecca, and Jane cried out of the happiness that they felt.
“Speak” Dr. newton order her. “What is your name?”
“Mm...my…name…is …Jane… My name is Jane.” She said this in a soft tone of voice.
“Yes! Magnificent. Now walk.”
Jane hesitated and gaze back at her father, who was in disbelieve watching
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While everyone was looking at her, tears were rolling down her cheeks. As she grasp for air because she was nervous, she was also happy to see her father and grandma happy. Jane decided to place her right foot on the floor. Her father was holding her hand while she placed her left leg on the floor.
“Let her go, she can do it by herself” Dr. Newtown was anxious of the outcome of his experiment.
As she moved her right foot to take a step she fell on the floor. She looked up to Dr. Newtown and he told her to try again. Rebecca was furious that the doctor did not let Jacob hold her. On the other hand, Jacob did as he was told, he trusted Dr. Newtown. Jane used her bed as support. She stood up again, and tried again; this time she was concentrated.
“Come on, you can do it” Dr. Newtown would not let his eyes off her.
Jane started walking. Her pace was slower than normal people but this was just her first time walking in her whole life.
Jacob happiness could not be described. Now, all he could think of is how her daughter would be with out those badges.
“Can we take those badges from her face now” Jacob asked with happiness knowing how lovely her daughter was going to be, how she was, initially, suppose to

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