What Is The Boy With The Abnormallly-Normal Extra-Large Heart
The potential picture book, titled, “The Boy with the Abnormally-Normal, Extra-Large Heart,” in my opinion, it is not suitable for publication.
First, it starts with a catching beginning, at first. I thought it was going to be a story about a child dealing with any sort of disability, which was way more interesting than the sudden twist that the whole plot has. The primary aspect of why I disliked this story is that it is difficult for me to understand the moral of this story, and I surmise it will be way more difficult for children to do the same. The plot also has holes and it is very inconsistent. And especially the end, it is the most baffling thing I have ever read.
As Mrs. Lee Byrd said, if it starts to lose my interest, it is not
worth to even bother. I would say that if the author desires to continue polishing this story to forget about the ‘big love’ thing and pen a story about a child who deals with heart issues or something like it—something regarding health issues—because, as I said earlier, that was way more compelling to me.
Additionally, I found spelling mistakes. The format in which the author submitted his work is fuzzy and oftentimes illegible. There were times that I was not able to completely understand the significance of a sentence simply because I could not tell what words were there.
The drawings are also inconsistent. They do not have a particular style with which the artist sticks with. In other words, they are an utter mess.
The final consensus it is that if the author does not have a clue about where he is going with the story, why should we even bother to figure out?
First, it starts with a catching beginning, at first. I thought it was going to be a story about a child dealing with any sort of disability, which was way more interesting than the sudden twist that the whole plot has. The primary aspect of why I disliked this story is that it is difficult for me to understand the moral of this story, and I surmise it will be way more difficult for children to do the same. The plot also has holes and it is very inconsistent. And especially the end, it is the most baffling thing I have ever read.
As Mrs. Lee Byrd said, if it starts to lose my interest, it is not
worth to even bother. I would say that if the author desires to continue polishing this story to forget about the ‘big love’ thing and pen a story about a child who deals with heart issues or something like it—something regarding health issues—because, as I said earlier, that was way more compelling to me.
Additionally, I found spelling mistakes. The format in which the author submitted his work is fuzzy and oftentimes illegible. There were times that I was not able to completely understand the significance of a sentence simply because I could not tell what words were there.
The drawings are also inconsistent. They do not have a particular style with which the artist sticks with. In other words, they are an utter mess.
The final consensus it is that if the author does not have a clue about where he is going with the story, why should we even bother to figure out?