“Students themselves may be key to solving problems”, is an editorial located on the website, “Journal Now”, The authors of the editorial are none other than the website’s editorial board. In the editorial the writer’s main goal is to persuade parents to get their teenager involved with the fight against bullying. They try to persuade them by using emotion and facts by, trying to make the reader feel upset or sad for the kids who get bullied. =, and they also try to show the reader how bullying is bad. The writers are to trying to stop bullying, they especially want it to stop on social media.
The writer’s main audience is parents of teenagers, who witness bullying. The reason I know this, is because in the article they say, “That’s how students who went to school before the age of the internet and …show more content…
In the end I kind of think they stayed away from the topic, and was trying to make the reader feel bad. I think they should have taken more time with writing the piece, it felt very rushed and unfocused. I also noticed in the article, they talked about how bully was bad and it needed to be stopped. In my opinion, I think if they really wanted to solve the issue of bullying, they should have put in the article, in ways that children could stop bullying, and ways for them to help their cause.
The editorial was trying to persuade the reader to get involved with the fight against bullying. They had a good start in trying to solve that, they used emotion and some facts to help support the idea. The editorial just needed more facts and less emotion in the piece. They basically used the whole editorial to try and make the reader feel bad for the kids who were bullied. The balance of the whole paper was off, they needed to put more ways on how to help bullying and to put more facts about how bullying not just the kids, but