Technique Lesson: Sentence Variety Hacker 117 - 119 When a rough draft is filled with too many same-sounding sentences‚ try to inject some variety – as long as you can do so without sacrificing clarity or ease of reading. Grammar checkers are of little help with sentence variety. It takes a human ear to know when and why sentence variety is needed. 1. Use a variety of sentence structures: • A writer should not rely too heavily on simple sentences and compound sentences‚ for the effect
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First 100 Days Aquino Administration By: Mark Jeffrey C. Dalimot “First impression lasts‚” we have new president and people have very high expectations of him‚ he should make positive actions in his first 100 days in the office. After getting an overwhelming mandate in May 10 polls‚ President-elect-Benigno “Noynoy” Aquino III will go down in history as country’s first bachelor president. In his first State of the Nation Address (SONA)‚ he focuses on corruption matters among officials. I
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Special report: Brazil Grounded Having come tantalisingly close to taking off‚ Brazil has stalled. Helen Joyce explains what it must do to get airborne again Sep 28th 2013 |From the print edition IN JUNE THIS year Brazil was struck by an outbreak of mass protests as sudden as a tropical storm. Brutal policing of demonstrations against a rise in bus fares elicited a wave of solidarity and brought more than a million marchers to the streets on subsequent nights. It also gave vent to previously
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Coordination in the Compound Sentence • Coordination puts equal value or significance on two or more parts of a sentence • Coordination can be used to join sentences‚ phrases words and even independent clauses. • When coordination is used to combine two sentences it creates a compound sentence. • Coordination conjunctions -And‚ but‚ or nor‚ for‚ so‚ yet • Correlative conjunctions -Not only‚ but also‚ either or‚ just as….so also • A semicolon can also be used to connect the sentences. • A semi colon
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The Spanish Armada was a fleet sent by Philip II of Spain to fight against Queen Elizabeth I in an effort to defeat Protestant England. The Spanish Armada is interesting because its defeat came unexpectedly when a fleet of 130 ships and 30‚000 men were defeated by a smaller scale counter-attacking convoy sent by the English. The nation’s current strategic planning was based on mistakes from previous battles‚ such as the Spanish Armada. Learning from these mistakes‚ the army‚ navy‚ and military can
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On January 20th‚ 2016‚ my life changed because of my English 100 class. My disgusted feeling for writing had to be retained within my soul because of the everyday morning journals. Two days a week at 5:30am in the morning‚ I had to write a page or two about a book or subject in class. Painfully difficult to do‚ I eventually overcame my hate for writing. Journals became breakfast‚ participation became lunch‚ and essays were my dinner. My heart and soul went into my writing and in doing so my writing
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Chapter 1 Study Guide The Spanish Empire in the Americas 1. Three arguments’ that Juan Gines de Sepulveda used to justify enslaving the Native Americans were for gold‚ ore deposits‚ and for God’s sake and man’s faith in him. 2. Three arguments that Bartolome de las Casas gave in attacking Spanish clonial policies in the New World were the Indians eating human flesh‚ worshiping false gods‚ and also‚ he believed that the Indians were cowardly and timid. 3. For comparisons that Sepulveda
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video called Kanzi and Novel Sentences it is clear that Kanzi does understand what is being asked of him. He is able to follow commands that are said by his trainer‚ which demonstrates an ability to comprehend language as seen within the video. The reasoning why this video can be used as evidence that Kanzi does comprehend language is the fact the trainer is saying new or novel sentences. Meaning that Kanzi has never heard these words put together in those sentences. Kanzi is able to take the action
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Soldier Sentenced to death for Fort Hood shooting A military jury sentenced Maj. Nidal Hasan to death for a 2009 shooting in Fort Hood‚ Texas. A death sentence for an army personal hardly ever happens. Maj. Nidal Hasan walked into a medical building where army soldiers were getting medical check-ups and shouted ‘Allahu akbar’ which means in Arabic for “God is great!.” He then opened fire with a laser-sighted handgun. He killed thirteen army men and women that day and injured over 30. When police
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The Rotter Incomplete Sentences Black (RISB) is a projective method of studying personality in a semi-structured scoring technique (Rotter‚ Lah‚ & Rafferty‚ n.d.). The RISB was originally used as means of screening large groups of soldiers to evaluate adjustment and fitness to return to duty and to obtain specific information for evaluation and treatment‚ however now it is primarily used to help guide initial clinical interviews (Corsini‚ 2010). The RISB is primarily used for individuals at the college
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