It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections‚ but I would not change your paragraph as to its content. There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons‚semi-colons‚ dashes in such complex sentences. In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should
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What is community? The term community is a group of interacting people‚ living in some proximity. Community usually refers to a social unit larger than a household that shares common values and has social cohesion. Community is a large group of people helping each other and benefiting from each other. Saint Jude Community refers to the students helping each other‚ and students working together in order to improve themselves and help others to be one in serving the school. The students achieve this
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On the surface I think I am like most young and modern American women: I take school seriously‚ I have dreams and goals for the future that I am determined to make happen‚ and I don’t expect anyone to do the hard work for me. I come from what is an increasingly normal background: my parents are divorced and I live with my mom and sisters and only occasionally see my dad since he now lives on the other side of the country‚ but I still feel very lucky to have a supportive‚ if spread out‚ family behind
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formal letter 22 Road Street Cambridge CB21 17 May 2011 Town Gazette Human Resources Department 29 West Station Way Hypermarket HY23 5GC Application for the position in administration Dear Sir or Madam‚ I am writing to apply for the position of The Town Gazzete administrator‚ which was advertised in the local newspaper. I am really interested in media and I want to join your professional work team. As you will notice on the attached CV‚ I have graduated from Bronx Academy High School
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Amsterdam To gain a strong understanding of the Dutch culture and lifestyles‚ you should definitely visit Amsterdam. You will be amazed by the large number of bicycles‚ stunned to see the culture and the architecture and be surprised of the smell of tulips. It is also the city for shopaholics and fashion lovers. But the most famous area would definitely be the red- light district‚ also known as the Wallen. When you are there you will be surprised to see the vast offers of legalized prostitution
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Since I have decided to become a better volleyball player‚ I will condition and study the sport. First‚ every day I will go to the gym‚ run for fifteen minutes to help with my endurance and lift weights every other day‚ such as squatting and deadlifting. By going to the gym‚ it will help me to keep up with my more advanced volleyball friends during long rallies and long games. In order to help with my volleyball skills‚ I plan on going to local San Jose open gyms. At the open gyms‚ I will focus on
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Zhu 1 Xiru Zhu Professor Andrews Class: Enl28 Date: 1/29/14 The Impact from Families and Communities Family‚ culture‚ and community are essential foundations of our lives. People are influenced greatly by their families and communities. Our parents heavily impact us from our formative years since all of our time is spent with them. We are impressionable in our youth and spending
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teachers that mention non-standard English such as taboo words in their classroom. What are taboo words? Taboo words are“sanctioned or restricted on both institutional and individual levels under the assumption that some harm will occur if a taboo word is spoken. The exact nature of harm to befall the speaker‚ listener‚ or society has never been entirely clear” (Heins‚ 2007). We use taboo wordsto be emotionally expressive‚ but people use taboo words with their friends to show the depth of their relationship
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300 Word Essay I chose freedom of religion because it is the one bill of rights that I believe has the broadest expansion in the constitution. I believe that everyone has the right to believe in a supernatural belief. That is why we have the establishment clause and the free-exercise clause. Which were established to keep the government from interfering with the exercise of religion. But in today’s time the government does have the right to limit the practice of a religion‚ but you still have
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Heya‚ I love sociology and my memory for all the information is great. The only thing which fails me is I cannot write an essay for my life! I know all the A01 and A02 but have no idea how to structure the essay for this... My problems are with both AS and A2. I am doing the same units (families‚ education‚ religion and crime) but with no idea how to write an essay I am gettign grades which don’t refelct my knowledge at all! Reply Maicccccmannnn’s Avatar Maicccccmannnn
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