getting my grade for my Visual essay. I wanted to focus on staying on topic because that was one of the things that I struggled with and got points taken off because of that. I also wanted to work on my comma splices‚ and punctuation‚ which I usually struggle with and got points taken off. I also wanted to improve working on my tone‚ and the way I write or express myself while writing because sometimes‚ I get comments from the Writing Center‚ and from my professor. In my Rebuttal Essay‚ I think I did a
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English 102 6 February 2013 “Snapping Beans” Analysis The poem‚ “Snapping Beans” ( rpt. in Michael Meyer‚ The Bedford Introduction to Literature‚ 9th ed.[Boston: Bedford‚ 2011] 782)‚ by Lisa Parker‚ is about a student who came home from school to visit her grandmother. When asked by her grandmother how school was going‚ the student reveals that she likes it there even though she knows that her grandmother would not approve of her friends and what they talk about. The narrator uses figures of
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Hey Gar‚ your writing response sounds very interesting to me; especially your interpretation of “Why women smile” is a version of non-bias. In fact‚ you have also pointed out that the quote in the essay can be applied to any genders. Honestly‚ I enjoyed your writing tone very much because you are honest and unbiased. Importantly‚ your main idea and essay is very precise and informative where I find very insightful‚ easy to understand and persuasive. In my opinion‚ there is actually plenty of silent
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The name of the book that I read was Behind the Dolphin Smile written by Richard O’Barry and Keith Coulbourn. It has 288 pages‚ and was Published July 7th 2000 by Renaissance Books (first published September 1st 1991). Behind the Dolphin Smile is a book that is based on the true story of a dolphin trainer that was holding the dolphin that played Flapper on TV in his arms as it died of stressed. It was then that he realized that his career training dolphins had been a mistake and that dolphins deserve
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It seems that nothing has more power to elevate a mood than the impact of a genuine smile. Surprisingly enough‚ the benefits of a smile extend not only to the recipient of the warm gesture but also to the smile’s originator. Yes‚ the old quotation may be true. “A smile is a little curve that sets a lot of things straight.” Here are some of the many benefits of a smile: Benefits of a smile: A healthier immune system Various studies conducted over the years have shown that smiling and laughter can
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was so close to laughing at me and he just suppressed it by displaying me his most gorgeous smile. If he hadn’t been good-looking I’d be so pissed off with him. However‚ since I find him attractive‚ I just let it pass. When I took up the stairs from the basement up to the ground floor‚ I took a second look at him and he just smiled the same gorgeous smile he had when I first saw him. I can’t help but smile back at him and yet it got me thinking‚ “Did he really actually laughed at me? Or am I just
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Dinner Party Literary Analysis “Hisss” “Hisss” you hear a snake crawling under the table but yet you are not afraid and your a women. “The Dinner Party” by Mona Gardner is a story about a colonel‚young girl‚american naturalist‚and a hostess. It is set in India in the 1940’s where gender stereotyping is very common. The high rankings in this story are having dinner at Mrs. Wyness house. There is one question that everyone debates about which gender has more self control.There is a snake problem that
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Writing Although it often seems that paragraphs can take an infinite number of forms‚ there are really only a few formats for paragraphing in formal‚ academic prose. What makes paragraphs seem unique to the reader is the style of the writer’s prose‚ not the actual format of the information. There are four main types of paragraphs in academic prose: the standard paragraph‚ the explanatory paragraph‚ the evidential paragraph‚ and the introductory paragraph (whose format is sometimes mirrored in the
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Qanun: 1. What are your overall impressions of the instrument? How difficult does it seem to play? Do you like the sound? Why/Why Not? This instrument reminds me of the Chinese guzheng that I used to dream of playing when I was young. Both instruments are zither-like‚ so I believe that is why I thought of the guzheng initially. The qanun seems somewhat easy to play; however‚ I do not play any instruments‚ so I am sure I will have a hard time with it. The man in the video also said it can be hard
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A Visual analysis of advertising techniques English 1101 Revised A Visual Analysis of Advertising Techniques Got milk? Those two little words started a phenomenon that swept across America and eventually became recognized throughout the world. What started in October 1993 as an attempt by the National Milk Processing Board to increase sales and raise awareness of the health benefits of drinking milk has turned into a multi-million dollar cash cow. They created a witty slogan that
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