initial problem? 1a) I used an anecdote to make it more interesting. Also I said why this problem bothers me. 1b) My introduction should’ve been longer 2a) How do I provide cues that my purpose is to explore a problematic question rather than argue a thesis? b) How might the opening section of my draft be improved? 2a) I posted a question not a thesis. I didn’t show my beliefs I just showed the question. 2b) It should be a little longer Narrating the Exploration: 3a) Is the body of
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Around the world many children get vaccinated. Vaccination lowers the risk of sickness. Children should get vaccinated early as possible. Vaccinations allow the immune system to recognize and fight off illness. Children should be vaccinated for three reasons. One‚ being vaccinated can save many children’s lives. Two‚ vaccination is very safe and effective. Three‚ being vaccinated can protect others from sickness. To begin with‚ vaccination can save a child’s life. Vaccines can protect children from
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this is a bad decision and that no one except law enforcement and military should carry guns. My personal opinion on the matter is that if the person has legally obtained a concealed hand gun license through their state then they have the right to carry a weapon. When you sit back and think about the thousands of criminals that walk the streets every day with a gun in their waistband or jacket pockets illegally‚ then we should be able to do the same thing in order to protect ourselves. Is the concealed
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WHY GIRLS AND BOYS SHOULD’NT PLAY SPORTS TOGETHER! Girls and boys should not be in co-ed teams due to the injuries‚ fighting‚ social issues and the difference in both sexes performance. Another issue is the misunderstandings during physical contact sports‚ like football‚ rugby‚ lacrosse and hockey. Therefore girls and boys should not play sports together because it complicates and presents an unsafe environment. Usually when boys and girls play sports together major injuries occur‚ especially
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Why I Should Be On Yearbook Staff I think I should be chosen for the year book staff because I am a very creative person. Being creative and expressing myself is something I definitely love doing‚ and I feel that if I could be a part of creating the year book‚ I could show off my creativeness. I always have a positive attitude and I like making people laugh. Qualities like that are the reasons that everyone loves me; I’m an all around person. Being able to talk to people to get them to buy a yearbook
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Why I Should be Promoted I should be promoted because I am a B+ student and I love to be a great student. I strive to better than I am now and am gradually progressing. I do 4 sports‚ I run indoor track‚ outdoor track‚ cross country‚ and raiders. I am good at running I run a 5:25 mile and my 5k is 18:50. For my age that is a very fast time. I should be promoted because I am active in the St. Johns community I have went in the March for Life and was a Shadower. I try to do as much as I can if things
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Why Euthanasia Should Be Legalized Euthanasia is a term used to describe a practice of intentionally killing another human being with or without their permission; when they are terminally or hopelessly ill. The word is derived from the Greek language combining the term "eu thanos" which means easy death. (Webster) By definition‚ euthanasia has become one of the most controversial issues of all time. Euthanasia is a practice used by doctors in the most extreme circumstances‚ for patients they feel
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Why examination should not be abolished Examinations are a common way to examine students ‘knowledge and abilities of subject at school all over the world. Some people disagree that examinations create competition prepare students for life and should not be abolished. However‚ experts say that examinations do not measure student knowledge. Examinations may have some drawbacks with regards to pressuring students ‘health; However‚ in my opinion‚ examinations should not be abolished‚ because examination
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Falling off a bicycle can cause sober and sometimes serious head injuries. Wearing a helmet helps to protect our vital organs - the brain. We should wear helmets every time we are cycling‚ as well as kids. Even if a child thinks this is uncool and he looks funny‚ you should tell him that‚ it looks way less cool to have face all scarred up from sliding on the concrete or dirt. Research shows that half of the injuries received by cyclists are to the face and head and about 75% of all bicyclist deaths
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same rights that our ancestors have fought for during the enforcement of the Fifteenth Amendment. The laws that affect the average individuals‚ the influences of various platformed parties‚ and the importance of voting in society exemplifies why Americans should value their right to vote. Many laws affect the American’s rights to vote as an individual. For instance‚ the Fifteenth Amendment to the Constitution states that it grants Americans the right to vote‚ furthermore stating that the “right of
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