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"I should have appreciated my life while i had it." Emma thought. It had all happened so fast..........one day and that's all it took. "Why" Emma pleaded remembering what had happened.

It all started when Emma got home from a gruesome school day,having gotten her B down to a C and her mom and dad telling her she has to get braces. Getting off the school bus and inside; Emma immediately went for the food.She went up the stairs hands full of food and homework ,and stubbing her toe toe in the process of getting in the room. Even though that didn't matter now,she was in my room where no one trespassed.Hours went by before she knew it, and all she heard was banging on the door, Emma felt her normal face go into a frown, she got …show more content…
Emma opened the fridge only to be disappointed when she had seen that they STILL hadn't gotten the milk. She looked around for her mom and dad. “Where are they?” Emma thought."They must have slept in or something"Emma contemplated.She walked to their room bowl in her hand to vent about the milk. “ Mom dad,” she said as she walked into their room. Frowning she taped her dad. Then getting frustrated she shouted "Get off your butts and get some milk,it's not like you have anything better to do" After a few minutes she started thinking the worst she quickly jabbed him and tried to find a pulse. All the blood rushed out of her face and she turned deathly pale. Running over to the other side of the room to wake her mom she also tried to find a pulse. She found the same result. She fell to the ground not able to get up. She touched her face only to find it has been soaked with my tears and snot.She screamed and wailed to anybody or thing that was listening,"i'm sorry,please forgive me i didn't mean what I said" just come back. Emma's brother came in looking at her like she was crazy. For one second she thought why or how he got out of his room only to remember what had happened in this very room only hours ago.Then as Emma was lost in thought the cold realization crosses Jade's face and tears start to fall down his face. she got the nerve to stand up and start to hug not only her two deceased parents but Jade as well. They were cold to the touch and as pale as a ghost. They already were ghosts ,she thought. Jade looked up at his sister wondering where their other sister
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