English 0812: Analytical Reading And Writing Analysis

In this English 0812: Analytical Reading and Writing, I have learned a great deal of beneficial knowledge in writing. As a bilingual person who knows Chinese and English, I struggle with Literature writing a lot ever since young. Even though I grew up in the United States from Kindergarten, English is still a challenging subject in my educational path. After attending the English 0812 class in this semester, I have improved on my writing, analyzing, revising, and editing skills. I am very satisfied and pleased with my development. Throughout the English 0812 class, I have written a total of 3 essays: “Technology Influence American Student’s Perceptions on Plagiarism”, “Privacy Concerns on Internet”, and “Integration of Chinese Food with American’s
Essay 3 was about modification of Chinese food. In this essay, I discussed the modification of Chinese food in America and Philadelphia. The reason why I struggled on this essay the most was because of narrowing the area of my topic to focus in Philadelphia only and not America in general. For this essay, there was only peer review to receive feedbacks for it. The peer review only provided helpful feedback to a certain extent, so I relied heavily on my own revision and editing skills for better improvement. As for Essay 1, it was “Technology Influence on American Student’s Perceptions on Plagiarism”. This essay was based on Trip Gabriel’s claim that digital technology makes cheating and plagiarism much easier and then it was supported by another class reading assignment and an ethnographic report. My professor, Carolina Maugeri, provided me two feedbacks since the I didn’t reach the expected grade requirement due to some organization issues and not fully developed supportive details. Therefore, I turned in a revised Essay after on these areas. In the peer review for this essay, I didn’t participate a lot except just writing feedbacks on the essay copy of my peers. My second essay was titled “Privacy Concerns on the Internet”, which discusses the potential harms of releasing private information on online and ways to avoid or protect oneself from privacy invasion on the Internet. This essay was much better because I explained my quote efficiently and connected them as much as I