Example Of Persuasive Letters

Dear Mr. Jones I have recently bought a white Xbox, four games, three battery packs, and two chargers I bought it out your store M&T Electronics. I bought it on 9/1/15.
The Xbox won’t turn on I plugged it in and unplugged it like ten times I even bought new cords and it still won’t work. The black controllers are missing buttons and some of the buttons are stuck in the controller.
I called the service department on 9/2/15 and told them my problem, they told me they would call me back and never did. Then I called back the next day and they told me I would have to talk to the manager. They said he out on break, and he would call me back when he get back. I let two days pass and still no call back.
I hope that I can get help with my problem,