I felt like I was about to present my grandfather's life in a very vivid way, and show how great of a person he was. Still, there a few things I wish I would have done differently. One thing I would have changed was telling the story about my grandpa’s condition at this point in his life. In my speech, I only said the doctors told him he had few hours left in his life but he overcame this issue. I didn’t give much explanation to what was happening during this occurrence. Instead, I should have talked about he had a blood clot in his leg and they thought he would need his leg amputated, but he couldn’t do a surgery. Luckily, the clot wasn’t as bad as they expected, and he was able to go home. Like every speech I’ve done this year, I also wish I would have used more gestures during the course of my speech. This helps the audience understand my message and keeps them involved. I also think I could have started the speech in a more capturing way. Truly, I’m very content with how things went in my speech, but like anything, there always some improvement that can be
I felt like I was about to present my grandfather's life in a very vivid way, and show how great of a person he was. Still, there a few things I wish I would have done differently. One thing I would have changed was telling the story about my grandpa’s condition at this point in his life. In my speech, I only said the doctors told him he had few hours left in his life but he overcame this issue. I didn’t give much explanation to what was happening during this occurrence. Instead, I should have talked about he had a blood clot in his leg and they thought he would need his leg amputated, but he couldn’t do a surgery. Luckily, the clot wasn’t as bad as they expected, and he was able to go home. Like every speech I’ve done this year, I also wish I would have used more gestures during the course of my speech. This helps the audience understand my message and keeps them involved. I also think I could have started the speech in a more capturing way. Truly, I’m very content with how things went in my speech, but like anything, there always some improvement that can be