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Is Calisthenics Be Effective For Everyone
I couldn't agree more with the point of view stated in your essay. I like the fact that you focus on calisthenics, it is the best form of exercise to build up core. My question is will calisthenics be effective for everyone?

There is no major correction to be made on your essay except some grammatical errors, a good proofreading will be encouraged. Also, the way you end your conclusion is
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