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Justin Kevin Cunha
Dr. McB
ENG 101
28 September 2012
Writer’s Checklist for Writing a Narrative 1. Are my title and introduction enticing? Yes, my title and introduction are both catchy and have good opening visuals.
2. Is my thesis effective? Yes, my thesis is effective and has question followed by answer. 3. Have I included enough details so the reader can visualize my experience? Yes, there is details so the reader can visualize my experience with series of events. 4. Are the events presented in a logical sequence? Yes, events are presented from step to step.
5. Have I used transitions to help the sequence of events flow smoothly? Yes, the essay has series of events that transition smoothly.
6. Have I used dialogue (if appropriate)? N/A
7. Have I used a consistent point of view and verb tense? Yes, the essay has a point of view from the points of view and has well sited words.
8. Is the point of my narrative evident? Yes, the point of the narrative is the story being told in the third person.
9. Have I ended the story satisfactorily? Yes, The story has a very well written conclusion. 10. Have I proofread thoroughly?
Yes, I have proofread thoroughly and made sure spelling and sentences are complete. Cunha 1
Justin Kevin Cunha
Dr. McB
ENG 101
28 September 2012 Military Minds Military is a subject that have a lot of politics in it besides just soldiers who fight for their
countries.
Justin Kevin Cunha
Dr. McB
ENG 101
28 September 2012
Writer’s Checklist for Writing a Narrative 1. Are my title and introduction enticing? Yes, my title and introduction are both catchy and have good opening visuals.
2. Is my thesis effective? Yes, my thesis is effective and has question followed by answer. 3. Have I included enough details so the reader can visualize my experience? Yes, there is details so the reader can visualize my experience with series of events. 4. Are the events presented in a logical sequence? Yes, events are presented from step to step.
5. Have I used transitions to help the sequence of events flow smoothly? Yes, the essay has series of events that transition smoothly.
6. Have I used dialogue (if appropriate)? N/A
7. Have I used a consistent point of view and verb tense? Yes, the essay has a point of view from the points of view and has well sited words.
8. Is the point of my narrative evident? Yes, the point of the narrative is the story being told in the third person.
9. Have I ended the story satisfactorily? Yes, The story has a very well written conclusion. 10. Have I proofread thoroughly?
Yes, I have proofread thoroughly and made sure spelling and sentences are complete. Cunha 1
Justin Kevin Cunha
Dr. McB
ENG 101
28 September 2012 Military Minds Military is a subject that have a lot of politics in it besides just soldiers who fight for their
countries.