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Personal Narrative: Marble Troubles
As my mom, Alex, Donna, and I drove in the warm car turning the A.C. on max, I looked out of my window and then decided it was going to be a long drive, two hours so I start playing on my mom’s phone. What felt like five hours was two. But finally we had arrived.

Once we pulled up to the Hilton we parked our car and then walked in. There were polished marble floors. We took are key and the went up to our room to put are bags down. I looked out our window and saw the bright yellow sun sparkling on the ocean. I could hear the waves. We got on our bathing suits and went to the pool and saw a hot tub and heard that it was one of four. First thing I do is ask my mom if i can go in.
“Sure,” my mom exclaimed. I got right in the hot tub is so
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