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What you want to study at university and why * Specific aspects of the courses that interest you * Examples of coursework you have completed * Practical work you have enjoyed * Books, articles, etc. you have read related to the subject area * Work experience or voluntary work in this area * Conferences you have attended * Personal experiences that lead to the decision to take this subject * Where you hope a degree in this subject will take you in the future * Experiences that show you are a reliable and responsible person * Part-time job * Business enterprise * Community and charity work * Sixth form committee * Helping out at school events and open days * Young Enterprise, World Challenge, Duke of Edinburgh award, Asdan Award, Debating societies, and what you have gained from these experiences.
Your interests and skills * What you like to do in your free time * Sport and leisure activities * Subjects you study that are not examined * Musical instrument(s) you play * Languages you speak * Prizes you have won or positions achieved in your interests
From the personal statements you have just read through, you may have gathered the following guidelines: * Don’t sound arrogant and pretentious * Try to have an interesting phrase or paragraph to start and finish on * Try not to quote books, magazines or publications in a way that makes it sound like you’ve only read them to put them on your statement. * Do not lie outright and stay as close to the truth as possible * Don't try to be funny or make jokes in your statement * Don't start every sentence with I * Don't include your hobbies and interests unless they are relevant * Don't use vocabulary you don't normally use and just looked up in a dictionary * Don't use famous quotes in your statement unless you back them up with information on how and why this person’s quote influenced you. Dropping them in

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