Persuasive Essay On Sports Injuries
Sports Injury Persuasive Writing
Do you know anyone with a serious sports injury? Over 5.3 million americans are living with traumatic sports related injuries. Some sports injuries will have a lasting effect of a person’s life. Some people say that kids are protected while playing sports but inexperienced coaches, unenforced laws, and undeveloped technology will all lead to serious injuries to players. These injuries can be the cause of a child’s damaged well-being and learning ability/mental health. Do you think its worth the risk? One reason there are so many serious injuries in competitive sports is because, there is a lack of coaches with good experience. Without a good coach, players can suffer serious injuries due to wrong coaching technique. …show more content…
Joining a competitive sport comes with a little bit of danger and risk. Many people believe "That rarely ever happens, people getting big injuries" 3,800,000 concussions were reported in 2012, double what was reported in 2002.(TS 2 pg.2 art. 1 Paragraph 7 ) That's a lot of people! Many people get injured easily. A good coach is an important part of staying safe and having fun while doing that. There are many inexperienced coaches. "Personally, if I had a son, I would not be concerned with him playing football. I would however make sure that his coaches understand the proper techniques that decrease the risk of concussions," (TS 2, pg. 14 art. 3 Paragraph 22) This is significant because the person is saying he would be worried about coaches over him just playing football. Other concerns are, sports injuries interfering with student’s education and technology that doesn’t keep player’s safe. “We work to reduce forces of impact to the player’s head,”(pg. 15 art. 4 p.4) In conclusion, competitive sports are super fun and a great experience to try out but you can't always leave your worries
Do you know anyone with a serious sports injury? Over 5.3 million americans are living with traumatic sports related injuries. Some sports injuries will have a lasting effect of a person’s life. Some people say that kids are protected while playing sports but inexperienced coaches, unenforced laws, and undeveloped technology will all lead to serious injuries to players. These injuries can be the cause of a child’s damaged well-being and learning ability/mental health. Do you think its worth the risk? One reason there are so many serious injuries in competitive sports is because, there is a lack of coaches with good experience. Without a good coach, players can suffer serious injuries due to wrong coaching technique. …show more content…
Joining a competitive sport comes with a little bit of danger and risk. Many people believe "That rarely ever happens, people getting big injuries" 3,800,000 concussions were reported in 2012, double what was reported in 2002.(TS 2 pg.2 art. 1 Paragraph 7 ) That's a lot of people! Many people get injured easily. A good coach is an important part of staying safe and having fun while doing that. There are many inexperienced coaches. "Personally, if I had a son, I would not be concerned with him playing football. I would however make sure that his coaches understand the proper techniques that decrease the risk of concussions," (TS 2, pg. 14 art. 3 Paragraph 22) This is significant because the person is saying he would be worried about coaches over him just playing football. Other concerns are, sports injuries interfering with student’s education and technology that doesn’t keep player’s safe. “We work to reduce forces of impact to the player’s head,”(pg. 15 art. 4 p.4) In conclusion, competitive sports are super fun and a great experience to try out but you can't always leave your worries