Reflection On My Writing

As I review my work that I have completed thus far in this course, I find that I continue to make progress in each assignment that I write. In the first reflection, I expressed that I wanted to learn how to improve my grammatical errors, sentence fragments, and getting straight to the point. And this is something that I am consistently working on. For example, the assignment that I worked on that embodies what I need to improve on is shown the bad news memo that I drafted for class. I re-wrote the memo several times due to the fact that I found it to be very wordy. In the final draft, I thought that my memo had eliminated what I thought needed improvement. However, when my work was reviewed in front of my classmates it turned out to not be exactly that. I was told that my language was “”too flowery” which is something that I am usually guilty upon doing. Like I said in my first reflection, I knew I would have a hard
And going forward I want to improve. As we have entered midterm I have noticed that the assignments get more complex. And on top of that, we have to work on a project in between assignments as well. Currently, we are still working on our resumes. I am confident that my work on this has been done well. However, I do find that I might struggle on a cover letter simply because I have a hard time talking about myself and in a way “selling myself” in order to get the job and or internship I desire. I will take this assignment very seriously though because I am in the process of applying for several internship positions. And many of these positions require a cover letter as well as a resume. Having a clean resume and well-drafted cover letter from this class will come to be an advantage since I can use these two pieces in the application process. Lastly, I want to learn how to develop my project thoroughly and correctly so that the project can be easier on my group members and