Samanta Cevallos's 'The Bet'

Samanta Cevallos

English

The bet

In most of the story’s about love the narrator starts with:

Once upon a time… but not in this story. Let me tell you how

this story begins… Amelia an 18-year- old girl, with brown curly

long hair, and hazel eyes, and she is not that tall she is at

least 1.60, but that because her mother is a short woman too,

but her father that’s another case, her father is super tall and

that’s why her brother is also super tall. Now Amelia is not

your ordinary girl, she is not a bully, she is a prankster, like

the best prankster ever, she doesn’t like pink like the other

girls at her new school, she loves music, and animals, she hates

boys that are to full of themselves and think that they are the

best and the
‘’ sissy that was so fun!’’ said the little sister of Amelia.

‘’yeah I know, that was so much fun’ ’said Amelia.

When the both sisters finish their ice cream they went back

to their house so that they can finish unpacking their boxes.

When they got to the house they immediately started finish

unpacking, by the time they were all done it was dinner time and

someone had ring the doorbell, Amelia went to go look who is it,

and when she opens the door, she found the blue eyed boy of the

ice cream place was standing in her door with a plate of

brownies. ‘’what are you doing here in my doorstep’’ yelled

Amelia, ‘’ I just came here to drop these brownies for your

family, because my mother told me that you guys were new in the

neighborhood so she wanted me to drop tis off’’ said the blue

eyed boy. ‘’ ok thank you …., ‘’jace my name is jace babe but

you can call me your baby’’ ‘’ ok no how about I call
The next day it was Amelia’s first day at her new school

and she wanted to at least look decent. When she was all done

she went to her new car and drove to her school, when she got

there all the eyes were on her and she started feeling awkward,

but she still manages to keep her face up and be brave that was

until she bumps into the one and only jace in the hallways. ‘’

oh their babe be careful’’ I am not your babe idiot, now if you

excuse me I have to get to my class’ ’said Amelia, ‘’ not so

fast I didn’t get your name yesterday. That’s because I didn’t

tell you my name. well what’s your name babe_. I am not going to

tell you idiot. Why not. Because you don’t deserve to know my

name. oh really, mmm I bet you like me so much that you are just

shy to tell me your name. yeah no I don’t like you, I would

never like a guy like you. You want to bet. Bring it on idiot

you are going to lose. Ok babe the first want to fall in love

with the other person loses and the punishment for loosing is

doing whatever the other persons wants that person to do.