Surfing Thesis Statement
Assignment 8.1: Preparing an Informative Speech
Step 1:
Benefits of Surfing: Description and Demonstration
Step 2: Inform the audience of the benefits of Surfing. Thesis Statement: Practicing Surfing has many health benefits.
Question: What are the benefits of Surfing?
Main Points: Improves health Improves energy Relieves stress Provides mental clarity. Helps with strength and agility.
Step 3:
Description of the audience: A group of college students
Topic: Benefits of Surfing
Specific Purpose: Inform the audience of the benefits of Surfing
Thesis: Surfing has many health benefits and its fun.
Question based on thesis: What are the benefits of Surfing?
Main Points: Surfing
daily relieves stress. Surfing improves energy. Surfing provides mental clarity.
Step 4: Claim and Proof Pattern
Step 5:
Title: Surfing, Is It Medicine for the mind?
General Purpose: Inform
Specific Purpose: Inform the audience of the benefits of Surfing. Thesis:
Surfing has many health benefits.
Surfing daily can improve health. Introduction:
Tired of always having an aching back or fatigue and stressed through your daily routine. Of course everyone can say yes. Today I’m here to talk about the many benefits of Surfing. With information proving it leads to mental clarity and improves energy and relieves stress, you will want to incorporate this into your life!
Body:
Claim: Surfing has many health benefits.
Transition between claim and proof: Studies have shown with surfing practiced on a routine basis have many health benefits.
Proof (general statement of what you will prove) II. Surfing daily has many health benefits First Proof A. Surfing provides mental clarity Support for A 1. Studies have shown Support for A 2. Power Point presentation
Transition from 1st proof to 2nd proof (Relieves stress and also improves energy.) Second proof B. Helps with strength and agility
Support for B 1. Studies have shown. (Provide evidence with research from the web.) Support for B 2. Power point presentation
Transition from 2nd proof to 3rd proof (Next, after having more energy who would not want to have relief of stress.) Third proof C. Relieves Stress
Show stress statistics & explain that stress is a disease that is treatable. Support for C 1. Guest doctor speak about stress Support for C 2. Show a short clip of a class.
Transition from body to conclusion. With all the health benefits of surfing who would not want to incorporate this into their life. Conclusion
Summary of thesis I. Summary of claim
A. Surfing a few times a week has many health benefits.
B. Summary of proofs
C. Surfing has been proven to provide mental clarity, improve energy and most importantly relieves stress.
Motivation II. A few times a week can make you feel better than you ever have!
Closure III. Thank you for your time. If any one has any questions feel free to come up to the front and ask anything you would like to know about Surfing.
References
1. WebMD
2. Surfing Journal
3. Surfer Magazine
Jennie Pickens
Step 1:
Benefits of Surfing: Description and Demonstration
Step 2: Inform the audience of the benefits of Surfing. Thesis Statement: Practicing Surfing has many health benefits.
Question: What are the benefits of Surfing?
Main Points: Improves health Improves energy Relieves stress Provides mental clarity. Helps with strength and agility.
Step 3:
Description of the audience: A group of college students
Topic: Benefits of Surfing
Specific Purpose: Inform the audience of the benefits of Surfing
Thesis: Surfing has many health benefits and its fun.
Question based on thesis: What are the benefits of Surfing?
Main Points: Surfing
daily relieves stress. Surfing improves energy. Surfing provides mental clarity.
Step 4: Claim and Proof Pattern
Step 5:
Title: Surfing, Is It Medicine for the mind?
General Purpose: Inform
Specific Purpose: Inform the audience of the benefits of Surfing. Thesis:
Surfing has many health benefits.
Surfing daily can improve health. Introduction:
Tired of always having an aching back or fatigue and stressed through your daily routine. Of course everyone can say yes. Today I’m here to talk about the many benefits of Surfing. With information proving it leads to mental clarity and improves energy and relieves stress, you will want to incorporate this into your life!
Body:
Claim: Surfing has many health benefits.
Transition between claim and proof: Studies have shown with surfing practiced on a routine basis have many health benefits.
Proof (general statement of what you will prove) II. Surfing daily has many health benefits First Proof A. Surfing provides mental clarity Support for A 1. Studies have shown Support for A 2. Power Point presentation
Transition from 1st proof to 2nd proof (Relieves stress and also improves energy.) Second proof B. Helps with strength and agility
Support for B 1. Studies have shown. (Provide evidence with research from the web.) Support for B 2. Power point presentation
Transition from 2nd proof to 3rd proof (Next, after having more energy who would not want to have relief of stress.) Third proof C. Relieves Stress
Show stress statistics & explain that stress is a disease that is treatable. Support for C 1. Guest doctor speak about stress Support for C 2. Show a short clip of a class.
Transition from body to conclusion. With all the health benefits of surfing who would not want to incorporate this into their life. Conclusion
Summary of thesis I. Summary of claim
A. Surfing a few times a week has many health benefits.
B. Summary of proofs
C. Surfing has been proven to provide mental clarity, improve energy and most importantly relieves stress.
Motivation II. A few times a week can make you feel better than you ever have!
Closure III. Thank you for your time. If any one has any questions feel free to come up to the front and ask anything you would like to know about Surfing.
References
1. WebMD
2. Surfing Journal
3. Surfer Magazine
Jennie Pickens