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Survival Of The Fattest Analysis
Survival of the Fattest(Introduction)
Written by: Tyler Stotz and Eric Thompson Edited by: Shreya Baskaran and Norah Kanukolanu(she’s very hawaiian) and a special thanks to Brady, Lena, Kelaiya, and many others for being in the story
Location: Tyson’s Corner Mall
Characters:Eric (Narrator/told in his perspective), Tyler, Edgar, Jee-min, Lena, Norah and Kelaiya. Once upon a time, I fell asleep during a massage at the Tyson’s Corner Mall. It was because I ate too many chicken nuggets and my mom forgot I was getting a massage. When I woke up, I was alone. Even the massage chair (that I named Ronald) left, but I still shouted,
“RONALD HELP! I WANT MY MASSAGE!”, but it never came back. I checked the weather and our area was in a state of emergency
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