Tap Water Persuasive Speech

First of all, I like how you approached your speech with the visual of a reusable water bottle, asking the question immediately grabbing the audience attention ‘By a show of hands, how many of you own and regularly use some sort of reusable water bottle like the one in front of me?’ That is something I wish I could have done different, some type of visual item to grab the audience attention even more. I thought your argument was well presented but I thought you did not really give the students a good enough reason to how it will benefit them. Have to keep in mind that students are more interested in things that benefit them in a huge degree. It seems as if you were just stating the problems it brings when wasting an excessive number of plastic bottles and the changes it will bring in the world if we used reusable bottles, that part I thought you did very well.
The statistics you provided kept me engaged in the speech which is a bonus but maybe you could have grabbed the audience attention again in the middle of your speech with a question or maybe just stating one of your stats with a high aggressive tone. One thing I also think you could have done better is how you included your fallacies, you really just added them in your conclusion but I think you could have squeezed at least one of them in the middle of the speech rather than stating them back to back in your conclusion. All in all I thought it was a successful