You Put Me Down Analysis
Dark is a voice that I used in my writing and dark was also in the writing that I read. Dark is similar to sad tone with a deeper meaning of sadness or hurt. In my writing I used the words "You put me down" and "I cant take it anymore" to show a darker meaning of hurt. When I was writing these words I chose words that could relate to other writers as well. "You put me down" is to represent my feelings that are getting pushed away and the insults are taking over my feelings. The words " I can't take it anymore" is to tell the reader I am hopeless and I can't bare to take the insults anymore. I am tried in those words, I have almost nothing left to myself, and I am living off of the hatred words. I am just recognizing the words are not me and I'm fighting to see the real me again. I am mentally done listening to those
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words and I need to breath again without pain in my lungs.
The voice I loved using to tell my story is determined.
I was Determined to get my soul back and that was the tone I used in my simple writing. I wanted my words to sound strong but small to show how I felt as a person. I used the words "continuing to smile" and "I found hope within" I found these words helped me best to get my voice across. When I wrote "continuing to smile" I was attempting to be strong and not let the enemy see through me. I was trying to cover my hurt by a little smile so they would think they were not getting to me. I smiled to try to see if they would stop and I would cover up my real feelings. The words "I found hope within" was to say I found a part of my past and I was realizing this was not me. The words these people were saying are not me. I have to be better than what they are saying. I know not everyone says these things about me so I thought back to all the complement I use to hear. Listening back through my mind I found the hope I needed to get back on my feet to were I used to be. I needed to get back before they were ever apart of my life. I needed to get back mentally before the harsh words ever came into my
life.
The final voice I used was disagree to say the final words to my poem. I needed a voice that would set the tone. I needed a voice that described the feelings and the words. I had used the words "your words define you, Your words are not me, for I know who I am, I am free". These words are how I got out of the hate, disrespect, and how I got my confidence back. I realized that those words they were saying are not me. Once I realized those words were not describing me, I knew I was free from everything they were saying. Hearing those words I was able to understand that is how they felt about themselves. I knew it was nothing to do with me after remembering my past. They were only describing themselves the hole time they were not describing me.
The three voices I used in my piece are the same as the three voices that are in the piece I read. I read the piece You Will Never See Me Fall and those and the three voices I had read. These voices made the original poem by giving a tone to the story. For the writer to have his word come off to the reader in the tone he wants he has to have words that fit a voice. I think the voices the writer chose were a great way to tell his story the way he wanted it to be told.
words and I need to breath again without pain in my lungs.
The voice I loved using to tell my story is determined.
I was Determined to get my soul back and that was the tone I used in my simple writing. I wanted my words to sound strong but small to show how I felt as a person. I used the words "continuing to smile" and "I found hope within" I found these words helped me best to get my voice across. When I wrote "continuing to smile" I was attempting to be strong and not let the enemy see through me. I was trying to cover my hurt by a little smile so they would think they were not getting to me. I smiled to try to see if they would stop and I would cover up my real feelings. The words "I found hope within" was to say I found a part of my past and I was realizing this was not me. The words these people were saying are not me. I have to be better than what they are saying. I know not everyone says these things about me so I thought back to all the complement I use to hear. Listening back through my mind I found the hope I needed to get back on my feet to were I used to be. I needed to get back before they were ever apart of my life. I needed to get back mentally before the harsh words ever came into my
life.
The final voice I used was disagree to say the final words to my poem. I needed a voice that would set the tone. I needed a voice that described the feelings and the words. I had used the words "your words define you, Your words are not me, for I know who I am, I am free". These words are how I got out of the hate, disrespect, and how I got my confidence back. I realized that those words they were saying are not me. Once I realized those words were not describing me, I knew I was free from everything they were saying. Hearing those words I was able to understand that is how they felt about themselves. I knew it was nothing to do with me after remembering my past. They were only describing themselves the hole time they were not describing me.
The three voices I used in my piece are the same as the three voices that are in the piece I read. I read the piece You Will Never See Me Fall and those and the three voices I had read. These voices made the original poem by giving a tone to the story. For the writer to have his word come off to the reader in the tone he wants he has to have words that fit a voice. I think the voices the writer chose were a great way to tell his story the way he wanted it to be told.