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Admissions Appeal Letter
Zyrice Mitchell
6396 Redan Square
Lithonia, GA 30058

4/26/2011

Office of Admissions
Admissions Appeal Committee
2000 Clayton State Blvd
Morrow, GA 30260-0285

Dear Admissions Appeal Committee:

As I write this letter to you, I am doing so with an immense sense of hope, appeal and expectation. In 2007 I was enrolled as a full time student I was happy and healthy enjoying the things that life had thrown my way. My grades were passing and I felt like I was going to be able to concur the world. I fell in love and got pregnant while working two jobs ,still trying to maintain school and school work I found myself over my head and under an extreme amount of stress. My grades suffered because of my pride, I felt that if I asked for


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