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Ellie moved from Wisconsin to California because her dad found a better job there. Ellie hates her parents for it, she wished she was back at her home in Wisconsin cuddled up with a blanket watching tv. But what she was doing instead was unpacking. Ellie had school the next day, she had to go to a new school called California Middle School home of the dolphins. She was going into 8th grade this year, but each time she thought about the new school she got the shivers she couldn’t believe she had to make new friends and get used to the school when she finally got used to her old school. The next morning she got up and got ready she went to the bathroom to fix her long brown hair ate her pop tarts and the bus came she said goodbye
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She grabbed the handle and opened the door she walked to her teacher the room was silent and everyone looked at her, she gave her teacher the note and sat down in an empty chair the rest of the day went quick, but she felt lonely.

She got home. “I’m home,” she screamed she walked to her room and threw her backpack on her bed. She walked to the kitchen and saw Her mom standing at the table cutting up vegetables for the soup she was making for dinner Ellie grabbed an apple and started to eat it, her mom asked, “ how was your first day of school?”
She stopped to think. “It was fine except I didn’t know where I was going the whole entire time.”
Ellie quickly ran to her room before her mom could ask any more questions she ate the rest of her apple while sitting on her bed after she decided to take a nap and she did. When she woke up dinner was already made by the time she got up she ate and did her homework in her room, her dad didn’t get home until 10:30 she ran to him and said good night and then said goodnight to her mom.

The next few days went by fast until one of her teachers called her parents to say she might need glasses or have dyslexia or
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She hated her new school because monday when she had to go to school some kids chanted mean names at recess and when she heard them she immediately ran to the bathroom to cry.

She didn’t look bad in glasses, but she still hated them and asked her mom if she could get contacts her mom refused.

A few weeks later it was almost her parents anniversary and her parents decided to take a trip to mexico and she was excited to go until they told her she was going to stay home. That’s when Ellie thought her life was over. She said goodbye and her parents left she was deciding what she was going to do for three days, first of all, throw away her new and expensive glasses then throw a party. Ellie ran to her room and grabbed her school phone book and called 110 random kids from her grade saying that she was having a cool party she called a pizza place and ordered 15 pizzas 7 pepperoni 3 sausage and 5 cheese. And where would she get the money from oh yeah her parents piggy bank he said her total was $105.94 she opened the piggy bank there were only 3 thousand dollars she snatched 200 dollars.The pizza delivery guy came at 5:45 with the pizza’s she gave him the money he did not care that she was a 13-year-old ordering 15 pizza’s and left. The doorbell rang and there were two boys who came in and asked if they were at the right house and she said yes and that they were

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